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Array ( [sid] => 38158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel i know [time] => 2004-03-10 20:51:47 [hometext] => this has nothing to do with breaking up with me bf..we r still together...its just a composition of my current thoughts that hurt. [bodytext] => Lonliness and desperation are all that i know,
the sun shines through my shades
but it never touches my doll eyes,
seeing nothing but salt water,
wiping away memories that will always come back.
The heart beats so slow,
i can't even breath,
my friends only see my tears
but not the visions i carry inside.
To afraid to let them know
the pain i feel at home,
i always smile for i'm known as the strong one amoung my peers.
I just need the voice to tell me its alright,
they need to hear my scream for help
in this world noone knows.
Please hold me tight
and tell me you'll never leave,
i'm just so afraid,
the scars of yesterday can't heal...
i'm so sorry.
But all this is what i feel,
its what i fear.
Last time i held my life
in the palm of my hand,
lisening to the tune
of my last dance.
But then my angel came along
and helped me up,
i found my dreams once more.
Now hes far from me,
living in the city,
i can barely touch him,
and thats what i need,
i need my angel again to show me my dreams.
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Angel i know

Contributed by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Lonliness and desperation are all that i know,
the sun shines through my shades
but it never touches my doll eyes,
seeing nothing but salt water,
wiping away memories that will always come back.
The heart beats so slow,
i can't even breath,
my friends only see my tears
but not the visions i carry inside.
To afraid to let them know
the pain i feel at home,
i always smile for i'm known as the strong one amoung my peers.
I just need the voice to tell me its alright,
they need to hear my scream for help
in this world noone knows.
Please hold me tight
and tell me you'll never leave,
i'm just so afraid,
the scars of yesterday can't heal...
i'm so sorry.
But all this is what i feel,
its what i fear.
Last time i held my life
in the palm of my hand,
lisening to the tune
of my last dance.
But then my angel came along
and helped me up,
i found my dreams once more.
Now hes far from me,
living in the city,
i can barely touch him,
and thats what i need,
i need my angel again to show me my dreams.




Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-03-10 20:51:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Angel i know (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:32:10 PM AEST
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glad you are still together and this was deep and raw with emotions

michelle


Re: Angel i know (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:44:01 PM AEST
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This is such a sad write. I'm glad everything is ok for you though. *S* Cynthia




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