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Array ( [sid] => 38094 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 'Till Death and Thereafter [time] => 2004-03-10 11:52:32 [hometext] => This poem is written for my best friend. He knows who he is, and i never want to hurt him again like i have. [bodytext] => How can I make my
Life make sense again?
Nothing I have
Tried is working.
I have this disease,
It grants me this
Constant pain & hurt.
It all started
When the Devil and his
Company betrayed me.
They would push me down
and kick me around until
I lay still.
Someone would find me,
Try to heal my wounds.
They would fail.
Execpt for one.
That one is helping
Me heal my scars
And open wounds left
By the Devil and his
Company.
That one has a magic touch,
A touch that reaches deep
Into my soul and extracts my
Worries and sorrows one by one.
I thank that one
For always being there for me
When my life did not make sense.
I am still confused,
But with your help,
I will be alright when the
World ends, when the
World stops turning.
We will go up into Heaven,
Hand in hand,
As best friends,
'Till death and thereafter. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spacecowgirl53023 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

'Till Death and Thereafter

Contributed by spacecowgirl53023 on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:52:32 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How can I make my
Life make sense again?
Nothing I have
Tried is working.
I have this disease,
It grants me this
Constant pain & hurt.
It all started
When the Devil and his
Company betrayed me.
They would push me down
and kick me around until
I lay still.
Someone would find me,
Try to heal my wounds.
They would fail.
Execpt for one.
That one is helping
Me heal my scars
And open wounds left
By the Devil and his
Company.
That one has a magic touch,
A touch that reaches deep
Into my soul and extracts my
Worries and sorrows one by one.
I thank that one
For always being there for me
When my life did not make sense.
I am still confused,
But with your help,
I will be alright when the
World ends, when the
World stops turning.
We will go up into Heaven,
Hand in hand,
As best friends,
'Till death and thereafter.

Copyright © spacecowgirl53023 ... [ 2004-03-10 11:52:32]
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Re: 'Till Death and Thereafter (User Rating: 1 )
by jc_92024 on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:57:16 PM AEST
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I can feel how you hurt your friend and you wouldnt want to hurt him again well this was a great fell of emotions thanx for sharing

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