Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:05:16 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 38074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SHORT CIRCUT [time] => 2004-03-10 04:06:55 [hometext] => Inspiration: My ex was getting colder toward me each day. Turns out he was seeing someone else. [bodytext] => Your a dead wire, can't you see?
There's a short circut tween u-n-me.
Someone's cut our power line
from your heart to mine.

Where is your burning touch
we savoured in so much?
Where did your longing go?
Who destroyed our heavenly flow?

Your soul felt my yearning inside
all my little luv vibes.
Use to your heart did know
when to let luv flow.

Now you get home later each nite.
What is a person suppose to feel? Oh my!
What took your luv from me?
We're alone now, don't cha see?

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

SHORT CIRCUT

Contributed by emystar on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 04:06:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Your a dead wire, can't you see?
There's a short circut tween u-n-me.
Someone's cut our power line
from your heart to mine.

Where is your burning touch
we savoured in so much?
Where did your longing go?
Who destroyed our heavenly flow?

Your soul felt my yearning inside
all my little luv vibes.
Use to your heart did know
when to let luv flow.

Now you get home later each nite.
What is a person suppose to feel? Oh my!
What took your luv from me?
We're alone now, don't cha see?

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2004-03-10 04:06:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:47:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

THAT WAS WRITTEN REALLY WELL! HIS LOSS NOT YOURS!! IT ONLY TAKES A
MATTER OF TIME TO START TO SHATTER A HEART!!! HE'LL SEE HIS GREAT LOSS & REGRET IT LATER!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by hidden_dezires on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:54:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

IM LOVIN THIS COS I FEEL YA ON THIS, AND IT FLOWS WELL...I CAN RELATE...I LIKE YOUR STYLE..I SEE THERE IS MUCH I CAN LEARN....HD

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:17:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Loved this, grrlfriend..... too bad..I's sure he regrets it now...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Yep, been there, done that, not fun.

Rita

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 04:52:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

It is his loss for whatever he got couldn't be anywhere near the treasure he had in you. Loved this poem alot Emy. Kie

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:13:37 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

He lost a gem when he lost you ... a sweet, sincere write ... Jan

Re: SHORT CIRCUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:05:07 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Emy, you sound like a sweet, gentle, kind hearted person. Something like this shouldn't happen to you. He's the one that's missing out. *S* Cynthia

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com