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Array ( [sid] => 38072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE [time] => 2004-03-10 03:55:35 [hometext] => LOVING SOMEONE WHO DOESNT LOVE YOU BACK BUT INSTEAD TAKE ADVANTAGE OF YOUR LOVE AND KINDESS..ITS REALIZING YOU BENG USED AND LETTING GO...ITS A WAKE UP CALL..(HELLO) [bodytext] => there's something i feel
i need to say to you
my heart and soul are battling
about what i should do

i have been holding on to the hope
of you and i
getting back together
and making a try

i know now it's only a dream
that will never be
its just a longing i have held
deep within me

i get so caught up in my love for you
its all i see and feel
a one sided love
that isnt the real deal

you only think of me or need me
when your life falls apart
your good ole girl
to help mend your broken heart

lift your spirits and
sooth your soul,
help you get yourself together
and get some sort of control

encourage you to be the man
you were born to be
and once that's done
you dont seem to need me

so i try to step back
and be the true friend
the one person in your life
on which you can depend

but that doesnt get me
what what i deserve from you
im tired of picking you up
and helping you through

all the changes someone else
put you through
constantly giving my all
an getting nothing in return from you

i finally asked myself
what is about you i cant let go
what makes me love
and want you so

the answer is
one of lifes mysteries
that i may never know
but i have to let you go

no more depending on me
cos i cant depend on you
its too much un-neccessary
stress to go through

no more picking you up
when your life
falls apart
no more walking all over my heart
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 358 [topic] => 43 [informant] => hidden_dezires [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE

Contributed by hidden_dezires on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:55:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

there's something i feel
i need to say to you
my heart and soul are battling
about what i should do

i have been holding on to the hope
of you and i
getting back together
and making a try

i know now it's only a dream
that will never be
its just a longing i have held
deep within me

i get so caught up in my love for you
its all i see and feel
a one sided love
that isnt the real deal

you only think of me or need me
when your life falls apart
your good ole girl
to help mend your broken heart

lift your spirits and
sooth your soul,
help you get yourself together
and get some sort of control

encourage you to be the man
you were born to be
and once that's done
you dont seem to need me

so i try to step back
and be the true friend
the one person in your life
on which you can depend

but that doesnt get me
what what i deserve from you
im tired of picking you up
and helping you through

all the changes someone else
put you through
constantly giving my all
an getting nothing in return from you

i finally asked myself
what is about you i cant let go
what makes me love
and want you so

the answer is
one of lifes mysteries
that i may never know
but i have to let you go

no more depending on me
cos i cant depend on you
its too much un-neccessary
stress to go through

no more picking you up
when your life
falls apart
no more walking all over my heart

Copyright © hidden_dezires ... [ 2004-03-10 03:55:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:00:54 AM AEST
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Fanstatic!
U go now 'cause u got it going on!
Even tho sad and hurts for a while U will feel better about yourself before long.
I can again relate.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:51:51 AM AEST
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A MASTER PIECE! I KNOW WHY,BECAUSE
YOU CARE ALOT & CAN'T CONTROL IT!! TO
ME THAT'S A GOOD THING,TO BAD PEOPLE TAKE ADVANTAGE OF IT THOUGH!!! GOD
BLESS YA!!!!
DAN!!!!!

Re: TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 11:24:19 AM AEST
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Hey I Really Like This

Re: TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:39:03 PM AEST
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THIS IS ANOTHER UNIQUE STYLE BY YOU.
HEI.. WHAT CAN ANYONE SAY ABOUT ABOUT THE THEME....
NO MORE ALL THE WRONG THINGS YOU GET...
NO MORE ALL THE RIGHT THINGS HE GETS...
JUST NOT SEARCHING FOR ANSWERS BUT MOVING ON.
THIS IS GREAT THOUGHT AND PRACTICE THAT MOST LOVERS NEED TO LEAR(ESPECIALLY THE LADIES)
I LOVE IT.

Re: TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by EUGENE on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:57:57 PM AEST
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You've got a way with expressing sadness that brings joy in the heart of ur readers.. what's the secret? Good work to behold both by the mind, soul, the ears and eyes.. just a wonderful work u have here.

Re: TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SOMEONES LOVE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:11:11 AM AEST
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know for every intent there is a purpose, however it is sweet teacher for lover who will fail to know that the game is not suitable and call it up. you displayed some mastery in the disclosure of solution to most problem hold alot of people in the love network.

keep it up,
secret lover.

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