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Array ( [sid] => 38048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Outside Life's Green. [time] => 2004-03-09 22:37:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => .

It will come to pass that I

soon will will hear from you

'Goodbye'

for your soul will cease to lie

about your secret friend.

And I will look as heartaches do...

outside life's green toward all blue

and anchor there in strands of you,

sunk deeply by love's end.

And there entwined in navy thread

my heart and I will make a bed

and sleep

a sleep

as deep as dead,

until at last ...we'll mend.

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Outside Life's Green.

Contributed by kay-p-m-devenish on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:37:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

.

It will come to pass that I

soon will will hear from you

'Goodbye'

for your soul will cease to lie

about your secret friend.

And I will look as heartaches do...

outside life's green toward all blue

and anchor there in strands of you,

sunk deeply by love's end.

And there entwined in navy thread

my heart and I will make a bed

and sleep

a sleep

as deep as dead,

until at last ...we'll mend.

Copyright © kay-p-m-devenish ... [ 2004-03-09 22:37:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Outside Life's Green. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:46:37 PM AEST
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Wow Kay..I loved this.. great style....
Have missed you so much...and your writing.
I haven't been on AD in awhile..so I'm glad you decided to pay us a visit.. Great to see ya..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Outside Life's Green. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:59:50 PM AEST
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oooooh! kay! i love this poem! absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! im so happy your posting again the last few days, your poetry is nothing less than amazingly brilliant, so many times you've calmed my soul, touched my heart, eased my mind, you have a pen of gold, may it ever flow, big warm hug, love you, ever nessa x
p.s. i finally got to urulu lol

@->>->-'s for a true @->>->-!!

Re: Outside Life's Green. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:10:01 PM AEST
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woa...just woa...that was awesome, absolutely awesome...leaves me stunned, great great great job...Stalkee (your newest fan :-))

Re: Outside Life's Green. (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:40:54 PM AEST
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I echo stalkee's words THIS IS AN AWESOME WRITE!! Great!! Loved it!
~Donna~

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