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Array ( [sid] => 38033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2004-03-09 21:13:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take me out of this box and throw it away
I am tired of hell and I hate this place
All of this pressure keeps me awake
Its something you just can’t erase.
Take me out of this box and go away
My memories, you can’t replace.
You see me trying not to say
Its driving me crazy, I am going insane.

I’m drowning
Till blue in the face
A broken man
Stands in my place
I’m drowning
Till blue in the face
A broken man
Stands in my place

The younger kind not knowing this pain.
Aggravation can’t make me change.
Please say you will just take me away,
Take me away to a better place.
The younger kind use what the say
To try to see if I will change.
That’s why they say take me away.
That’s why they say take me away.

I’m drowning
Till blue in the face.
A broken man
Stands in my place.
I’m drowning
Till blue in the face.
A broken man
Stands in my place.
Stands in my place.
Stands in my place.
A broken man
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Broken

Contributed by charlieslyrics on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:13:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Take me out of this box and throw it away
I am tired of hell and I hate this place
All of this pressure keeps me awake
Its something you just can’t erase.
Take me out of this box and go away
My memories, you can’t replace.
You see me trying not to say
Its driving me crazy, I am going insane.

I’m drowning
Till blue in the face
A broken man
Stands in my place
I’m drowning
Till blue in the face
A broken man
Stands in my place

The younger kind not knowing this pain.
Aggravation can’t make me change.
Please say you will just take me away,
Take me away to a better place.
The younger kind use what the say
To try to see if I will change.
That’s why they say take me away.
That’s why they say take me away.

I’m drowning
Till blue in the face.
A broken man
Stands in my place.
I’m drowning
Till blue in the face.
A broken man
Stands in my place.
Stands in my place.
Stands in my place.
A broken man




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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:25:04 PM AEST
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awesome! i loved this. really great write.
Arden


Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:48:16 PM AEST
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very strong emotion i like it. -david


Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:57:30 PM AEST
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Interesting .

Whisper


Re: Broken (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:50:30 PM AEST
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Hey ya bastard, how bout some credit to the originator of the song, that would be me......Daniel


Re: Broken (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:18:29 PM AEST
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i know but you didn't write all of it dan




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