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Array ( [sid] => 38007 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hell [time] => 2004-03-09 18:15:23 [hometext] => dont really liek this one, not that i like any of the crap i write but this was just a rant gone wrong [bodytext] => Why won't I die?
I just sit here and cry
So ******* ****ed off
At my own self pity,
Wishing I was strong
And clever and pretty
Suffering of self obsession
I have a confession,
I f*ck*ng hate myself.
All those times you see me laugh
You really see me crying.
All those times you see me smile
You really see me dying.
Shout and scream at myself inside
Constantly contemplating suicide.
And yet, no courage to do anything
No courage to commit that sin
Take your own life,
And go straight to hell
But what can hell be if it is not this?
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 14 [informant] => spider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

hell

Contributed by spider on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:15:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Why won't I die?
I just sit here and cry
So ******* ****ed off
At my own self pity,
Wishing I was strong
And clever and pretty
Suffering of self obsession
I have a confession,
I f*ck*ng hate myself.
All those times you see me laugh
You really see me crying.
All those times you see me smile
You really see me dying.
Shout and scream at myself inside
Constantly contemplating suicide.
And yet, no courage to do anything
No courage to commit that sin
Take your own life,
And go straight to hell
But what can hell be if it is not this?

Copyright © spider ... [ 2004-03-09 18:15:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:20:55 PM AEST
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oh trust me, hell is named hell cuz it's helluva a lot worse than how it is in this! erg, hope the rants continue though... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:33:06 PM AEST
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This world is no paradise, but it does have much to offer. Every day I look for one thing to delight me and let that one thing remind me that life is worth living. God always gives me at least one thing. Often more.
Keep writing. You are on the journey.
Stitch

Re: hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Osiris on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:17:59 PM AEST
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i understand spider, hell is a state of mind and can be felt on earth, i felt it myself, keep on writing ;-)
i attempted suicide once and believe me it aint the answer, winston churchill once said 'if your going through hell, keep going' and he was right, there is a way out

Re: hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:24:06 PM AEST
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Oh my. Thats some heavy **** stuff.
Great descriptive words .
And hey this aint Hell... its what You make it.

Whisper

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