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Array ( [sid] => 37917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You WERE My Favorite [time] => 2004-03-09 05:44:26 [hometext] => this is about love, relationships, and how quickly people can change [bodytext] => We have no friends
Only but trends
The latest fads always fade
Friendships are bonds
Stocks that grow strong
Until it's time to just trade

Worthless as dirt
The trust you hurt
I've flung forgiveness away
You take my hand
And then demand
I get the ***** out your face
(Like I'm the villiage idiot)

Maybe I'm fanatic
Call it hopeless romantic

Like whirlpools swim
I'm down again
In vicodin and warm gin
I'd like to slice
With love's sweet knife
A frown right out of your grin
(You were my favorite)

Between parched lips
You kiss my ass
Promising what?
To change the past?
Tomorrow dies
Today fades fast
Yesturday's gone
And nothing lasts

Maybe I'm fanatic
Call it hopeless romantic [comments] => 7 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 34 [informant] => jason_robert_britt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

You WERE My Favorite

Contributed by jason_robert_britt on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:44:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

We have no friends
Only but trends
The latest fads always fade
Friendships are bonds
Stocks that grow strong
Until it's time to just trade

Worthless as dirt
The trust you hurt
I've flung forgiveness away
You take my hand
And then demand
I get the ***** out your face
(Like I'm the villiage idiot)

Maybe I'm fanatic
Call it hopeless romantic

Like whirlpools swim
I'm down again
In vicodin and warm gin
I'd like to slice
With love's sweet knife
A frown right out of your grin
(You were my favorite)

Between parched lips
You kiss my ass
Promising what?
To change the past?
Tomorrow dies
Today fades fast
Yesturday's gone
And nothing lasts

Maybe I'm fanatic
Call it hopeless romantic

Copyright © jason_robert_britt ... [ 2004-03-09 05:44:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:16:58 PM AEST
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i really really like this. nice wording. good job by a very talented writer.
Arden

Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:33:17 PM AEST
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hope that the lasting impression of frienship doesn't leave a twinge of bitterness on you... good write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:17:43 PM AEST
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Hmm seem to recall reading this somewhere else lol. As i said, its really good. I'm glad you're on ypdc, i'll have to check out more of your stuff!

charlotte x_x_x

Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:12:50 PM AEST
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I can see the anger in this write. Fads fade out faster than friendship does. How can you befriend someone, then end up being shot down in the end? It doesn't make any sense. BTW, the comment you wrote one my write about Christ, there is no offence taken. I do not support the millions uopn millions of dollars that went in the making of this film. So, I agree with you there. I just wanted to write how I felt. He was treated and beaten down like a dog. It wasn't right. No, I'm not arguing with you or anything, I'm just trying to tell you my point of view. Nobody should benefit from His death. It's sickening. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment and telling me how you feel. I appreciate it. Very emotional write here by the way. I can feel your anger. *S* Cynthia

Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:56:07 AM AEST
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Sometimes you're a soul wandering in a treacherous desert...
Great work!
Greetz,
Hur

Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:05:03 PM AEST
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Hi!
This happens to be my favorite so far I really thougth this was an awesome write I can relate to it in some ways jason this one touched me...I hope we talk soon...

Care

Re: You WERE My Favorite (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:15:02 PM AEST
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It must have been a girl friend that made you feel this way. Here's what I mean, "The relationships we are the closest to hurt us the most and the deepest" the opposite sex is usually the culprit. If I am right tell me, what do you thing you can do to get better; you are a very good writer. Don't spend a great gift on bitterness. O-kay!

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