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Array ( [sid] => 37903 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Promises [time] => 2004-03-09 00:08:03 [hometext] => For a Friend [bodytext] => You keep making promises
That you can't keep
You're tearing me up And I can't sleep
You say things That you can't deliver
We're on seperate sides of an ocean
Not just a large River

You keep breaking my heart
And driving me insane
You're no longer happy
When I say your name
You come home with lipstick on your collar
The relationship you're tearing up is worth more than a dollar

So promise me this, yes just one last thing
When you come home it won't be for a fling
You can leave and never come back
It won't bother me and that's an honest fact

You can go ahead and go Just don't return
You keep breaking my heart and making
Me hurt I said some things I didn't mean
But it's no suprise you've said the same things

The only promises that you can't keep
Are the promises that you've made to me
Your promises they are all lies
And I know you think I'm not that wise

So promise me this yes just one last thing
When you come home it won't be for a fling
You can leave and never return
You can't break my heart and
You can't make me hurt [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 34 [informant] => RochelleLloyd [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Your Promises

Contributed by RochelleLloyd on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 12:08:03 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You keep making promises
That you can't keep
You're tearing me up And I can't sleep
You say things That you can't deliver
We're on seperate sides of an ocean
Not just a large River

You keep breaking my heart
And driving me insane
You're no longer happy
When I say your name
You come home with lipstick on your collar
The relationship you're tearing up is worth more than a dollar

So promise me this, yes just one last thing
When you come home it won't be for a fling
You can leave and never come back
It won't bother me and that's an honest fact

You can go ahead and go Just don't return
You keep breaking my heart and making
Me hurt I said some things I didn't mean
But it's no suprise you've said the same things

The only promises that you can't keep
Are the promises that you've made to me
Your promises they are all lies
And I know you think I'm not that wise

So promise me this yes just one last thing
When you come home it won't be for a fling
You can leave and never return
You can't break my heart and
You can't make me hurt




Copyright © RochelleLloyd ... [ 2004-03-09 00:08:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Your Promises (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 12:45:02 AM AEST
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just wanted to say your pretty good your self on the poems.I love this one. It's all very well spoken .And just wanted to thank you for your comments on mine..I try to express my feelings as they come and take the time to write them down..I'm not that great yet but i'll get better soon enough .


Re: Your Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by RochelleLloyd on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 12:48:26 AM AEST
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I think I know who you are, but since you posted anon. I thought I'd reply here and hope you get it. Anyway. Thank you and best of luck with yours.




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