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Where gentle whispers become silence, and words being to freeze
Poetic transcripts call out in zephyrs, move us deep inside
Sending each message on the wind, covering worldwide

Within a storm a message brews, inscriptions from ones thunder
Winds of words rip and pull to tear this book asunder
Striking down upon each page, inscriptions carved in cloud
This buoyant stone, hard as rock, floating high so proud

The essence laid by thunders wraith, for now the rains embark
Each falling drop, a thousand years, time within its mark
This page now soaked with written water, dripping with each story
A creation of perfected squall, a hurricane of glory

Typhoons of poetic madness pouring down like oceans
Embodied with the waves and currents of emotions
Settled in a tempest of silence, poetic bliss prevails
Insightful glory flowing past, thundered through in tales
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Thunderstorms Inscription

Contributed by forever_lonely on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 09:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

To dance upon the clouds, To soar above the breeze
Where gentle whispers become silence, and words being to freeze
Poetic transcripts call out in zephyrs, move us deep inside
Sending each message on the wind, covering worldwide

Within a storm a message brews, inscriptions from ones thunder
Winds of words rip and pull to tear this book asunder
Striking down upon each page, inscriptions carved in cloud
This buoyant stone, hard as rock, floating high so proud

The essence laid by thunders wraith, for now the rains embark
Each falling drop, a thousand years, time within its mark
This page now soaked with written water, dripping with each story
A creation of perfected squall, a hurricane of glory

Typhoons of poetic madness pouring down like oceans
Embodied with the waves and currents of emotions
Settled in a tempest of silence, poetic bliss prevails
Insightful glory flowing past, thundered through in tales

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-03-08 21:09:10]
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Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 09:26:48 PM AEST
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this is a very beautiful and intelligent analogy. well done.

Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by kayald on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:22:52 PM AEST
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this is definately one of my favorites....so deep and i really felt the connection and i think everyone could relate

Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:49:00 AM AEST
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dearest luke, you have outdone yourself, this is sooo beautiful, breathtaking, vividly image filled, keep writing!!!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:26:38 AM AEST
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Wooo ... a poetic storm ... awesome words, and as always an intense and riveting write ... Jan

Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 06:00:58 AM AEST
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This is a very special poem indeed. The essence of the storm, the grace of it's words..you have captured it magnificently my friend.

"The essence laid by thunders wraith, for now the rains embark
Each falling drop, a thousand years, time within its mark"

That may be the best line you've ever written, and just sent a shiver right through me. Insanely amazing poem, Luke.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 08:00:50 AM AEST
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Enthralling. :)

Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:42:28 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful! I love this one. Wonderfully written good job keep it up.
Arden

Re: Thunderstorms Inscription (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:58:39 PM AEST
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You sir, are one very talented man. Such images this evokes.

Very well done as always
Larry

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