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just the other day
a trip we took together
a time for us to play
up on a mountain top
we resteled in the snow
leaving all our cares
way down below
our minds were plenty empty
of the burdens of life
we had space for just two
a husband and his wife
laughter was on the agenda
and smiles all around
we loved this time together
with out a child sound
monday mornig now is here
and a mommy i must be
cuz let me tell you this
a sitter isnt free

michelle todd
3-8-04
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adventures

Contributed by putteragain on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I had me an adventure
just the other day
a trip we took together
a time for us to play
up on a mountain top
we resteled in the snow
leaving all our cares
way down below
our minds were plenty empty
of the burdens of life
we had space for just two
a husband and his wife
laughter was on the agenda
and smiles all around
we loved this time together
with out a child sound
monday mornig now is here
and a mommy i must be
cuz let me tell you this
a sitter isnt free

michelle todd
3-8-04

Copyright © putteragain ... [ 2004-03-08 14:24:01]
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Re: adventures (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:31:25 PM AEST
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Tee hee hee.
Going on a second honeymoon for 4 days later this month. I can sooooooooo
relate.
Stitch

Re: adventures (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:33:40 PM AEST
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oh i love this michelle! very cute ending too! heh, huggies n' love nessa

Re: adventures (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:33:48 PM AEST
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I feel so stupid
Wrestled see i can spell

Re: adventures (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:17:56 PM AEST
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The poetic construction is very good
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It seems to me in four week nips
Two should go away on trips
And love a love with tender lips,
This for free, I give you tip.

Re: adventures (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:26:57 PM AEST
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Hey Michelle this was really good. Really enjoyed this one alot. Kie

Re: adventures (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:28:11 PM AEST
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Restful times together away from snarling children are precious indeed....to most parents..he he he..I often have to play babysitter taking care of my nephews to my sister and my brother in law as they tried to go out on their own like you did here. But I would bet that once their childhood is over you will turn you heads around trying to find reasons for them to be close around...he he he

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