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Array ( [sid] => 37822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Unicorn's Room [time] => 2004-03-08 13:14:19 [hometext] => I dreamed of a dream to dream [bodytext] => Oh what a place
with flowers in bloom
trees on all sides
It's the unicorn's room

The scent, The aroma
of lilac it looms
so many the roses
In the unicorn's room

There's willow and Ivy
there's tall oak and peach
there's cherry and maple
walnut and beech

The grass is laid flat
from the striking of hooves
you can see where they enter
you can tell by the grooves

They've lived here for eons
It's all they have left
the place they come back to
to catch there breath

So few look upon it
even less know it's there
you often can't see it
for the mist in the air

SHHH look very hard
over there to the right
she's looking at us
as day turns to night

I just saw her horn
as it gleemed in the light
I SEE IT , I SEE IT
my god your right

Her white coat it shimmers
with small silver streaks
her main is unsoiled
with slight hints of pink

A tail to the ground
of silver and gold
It fluffs at the end
so strikingly bold

The hooves of her feet
no larger I've seen
please don't allow me
to wake from this dream

There's butterflies here
that don't wake' till noon
There's a graceful peace
In the unicorn's room

The colors of rainbow
a sweet gentle tune
plays all the time
but by what or by whom?

So I beg you don't wake me
allow me to stay
In this hidden place
with the unicorn to play

and allow me to find
the what or the whom
that's playing the tune
In the unicorn's room

TSW
11-14-00
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The Unicorn's Room

Contributed by tsw on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:14:19 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology

Oh what a place
with flowers in bloom
trees on all sides
It's the unicorn's room

The scent, The aroma
of lilac it looms
so many the roses
In the unicorn's room

There's willow and Ivy
there's tall oak and peach
there's cherry and maple
walnut and beech

The grass is laid flat
from the striking of hooves
you can see where they enter
you can tell by the grooves

They've lived here for eons
It's all they have left
the place they come back to
to catch there breath

So few look upon it
even less know it's there
you often can't see it
for the mist in the air

SHHH look very hard
over there to the right
she's looking at us
as day turns to night

I just saw her horn
as it gleemed in the light
I SEE IT , I SEE IT
my god your right

Her white coat it shimmers
with small silver streaks
her main is unsoiled
with slight hints of pink

A tail to the ground
of silver and gold
It fluffs at the end
so strikingly bold

The hooves of her feet
no larger I've seen
please don't allow me
to wake from this dream

There's butterflies here
that don't wake' till noon
There's a graceful peace
In the unicorn's room

The colors of rainbow
a sweet gentle tune
plays all the time
but by what or by whom?

So I beg you don't wake me
allow me to stay
In this hidden place
with the unicorn to play

and allow me to find
the what or the whom
that's playing the tune
In the unicorn's room

TSW
11-14-00

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Re: The Unicorn's Room (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:27:48 PM AEST
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simply beautifully enchanting:) absolutely enjoyable to read, more please... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Unicorn's Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:16:05 PM AEST
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OMG!!!!!!! This is breath taking. I love Unicorns. This is the most beautiful, enchanting write. Amazing. *S* Cynthia

Re: The Unicorn's Room (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:26:43 PM AEST
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very enjoyable and fantastically beautiful. best poem i read today!

Re: The Unicorn's Room (User Rating: 1 )
by dead_beauty on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:14:45 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem! I love how you envision the unicorn's "room". Lovely and well-written. I love it! ~ravenghost :):)

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