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Array ( [sid] => 37741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-03-07 22:01:03 [hometext] => This is a poem about my family life [bodytext] => All alone
No one here
Want to die
Bu I fear
That the one I love
Still will not hear
So I sit and wait
Until she knows
That I love her
But am alone

I shun fear
And especially sadness
Because all I want is just pure gladness
Impossible it is
'cause hope is in vain
No one has known
For I bottle things inside
I smile and just hide

This mask is fragile
And soon will break
Though I don't know
How long it will take
It shows nothing but happiness
But I am alone
And it will shatter
Just like glass

The bottle itself
Where my feelings are
Will break too
And leave a scar
Though this happens
No one will care
For I am alone
Invisible
Like air

My life is bad
My mother worse
Though it doesn’t help
I curse
At all the things left undone
Like trying to be
The perfect son
I'm alone
And no one cares
'cause alone I'll be
for all the years [comments] => 1 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => dark_angel_of_poetry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Alone

Contributed by dark_angel_of_poetry on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:01:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

All alone
No one here
Want to die
Bu I fear
That the one I love
Still will not hear
So I sit and wait
Until she knows
That I love her
But am alone

I shun fear
And especially sadness
Because all I want is just pure gladness
Impossible it is
'cause hope is in vain
No one has known
For I bottle things inside
I smile and just hide

This mask is fragile
And soon will break
Though I don't know
How long it will take
It shows nothing but happiness
But I am alone
And it will shatter
Just like glass

The bottle itself
Where my feelings are
Will break too
And leave a scar
Though this happens
No one will care
For I am alone
Invisible
Like air

My life is bad
My mother worse
Though it doesn’t help
I curse
At all the things left undone
Like trying to be
The perfect son
I'm alone
And no one cares
'cause alone I'll be
for all the years

Copyright Â© dark_angel_of_poetry ... [ 2004-03-07 22:01:03]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Crys on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:59:22 PM AEST
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WOW... I can totally relate. I dont talk to my family about anything and I pretend to be happy, but I'm not. In all honestly, I don't really want to talk to them although I am alone. I'm ashamed to say that becasue I love my family to death... But there's just some things a mother wouldn't understand... She expects so much from me, how do I tell her that her little girl is falling apart? *Shrugs* Great write, keep'em coming! CIAO!

*~*Crys*~*

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