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Array ( [sid] => 37726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The black widow [time] => 2004-03-07 18:57:05 [hometext] => I would like comments on this poem.. Tnx.. =) and the others as well [bodytext] => When I sleep at night I see a black widow fly,
I can feel her, she wonders why she had to die.
She often asks me how,
I really do not know.
Life can be so cruel now days
Giving you a slap in the face.
I see the black widow walking on the grave,
For death she is now a slave.
I do not know what went wrong,
I just keep telling her to be strong.
She can not feel the fresh breath,
Because she is the slave of death.
My nightmare was hunting me,
Now I know this was meant to be.
It is the part of living,
Now the widow asks for forgiving.
To find a meaning is not the key of life,
You can not find the answer in one simple knife.
Just live your life as you want to,
Then you know what to do.
So do not search for the key,
just show her what she wants to see,
inside of thee. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 48 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => (Edited by mod_10 as requested) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The black widow

Contributed by gothicangel on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When I sleep at night I see a black widow fly,
I can feel her, she wonders why she had to die.
She often asks me how,
I really do not know.
Life can be so cruel now days
Giving you a slap in the face.
I see the black widow walking on the grave,
For death she is now a slave.
I do not know what went wrong,
I just keep telling her to be strong.
She can not feel the fresh breath,
Because she is the slave of death.
My nightmare was hunting me,
Now I know this was meant to be.
It is the part of living,
Now the widow asks for forgiving.
To find a meaning is not the key of life,
You can not find the answer in one simple knife.
Just live your life as you want to,
Then you know what to do.
So do not search for the key,
just show her what she wants to see,
inside of thee.

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-03-07 18:57:05]
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Re: The black widow (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 07:09:03 PM AEST
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i would suggest you comment on others here also. but this is good.

Re: The black widow (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 07:24:32 PM AEST
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yes i agree you should also comment on other peoples poems. this was really good. very dark. wonderfully done.
Arden

Re: The black widow (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:08:22 PM AEST
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Ok, I will, thanks for noticing me=)

Re: The black widow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:40:30 PM AEST
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Good write, GothicAngel...
Jenni

Re: The black widow (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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very pretty, i enjoyed this poem, keep writing, your insightful:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: The black widow (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:03:58 PM AEST
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Hauntingly beautiful. I love your strong word choice, you seem to be able to write fine english to me.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

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