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One last Chance
Contributed by
Chilibear
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 01:33:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can you tell me what you thought when you first saw me?
Were you happy? Were you sad?
Did you really ever want me?
I remember the time.
I remember the place.
I remember the look you had on your face.
I remember the song we danced to that night.
I remember your hands and the position of the light.
Did you feel the way i feel, every second of everyday?
When you were here, and when you were away.
I try not to hurt...
I try not to cry...
But when i see you anywhere,
I just wanna die.
I'm down on my knees and i'm begging you.
Please.
Give me one last chance to show you,
This is me.
Copyright ©
Chilibear
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2004-03-07 01:33:01]
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Re: One last Chance
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 01:34:28 AM AEST
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| i can relate to this very well...good write, well done |
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Re: One last Chance
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:00:49 AM AEST
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| awwwww....... you are so sweet..... yep, another poem from you expressed how I felt..... all these questions and all these memories..... you know, the first time is always something we can never forget........ I hope you get what you want....... |
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