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Thinking of how i want to die
There is no point in going on
The heart is weak, but the head is strong

I will survive to pay you back
Tied down, day after day upon that rack
You turned the wheel so very slow
Silently grinning, your demons grow

Killing me with such vile games
Filling me full of pointless rage
You waited too long to let yours out
Then i came along to let you shout

You cannot be sad for what you made
Your creation I am, your demons unslaid
Living in darkness, looking at light
As you age, the less you fight

Feel your crushed dreams, torn hatred
Twisted dark games, feel what was taken
You payed me back for being your son
I was created for you to love, not betray
And from within your heart you did slay
My hopes and dreams, but thrice as bad
But it won't be long, so don't be sad

My frozen rage, will thaw one day
And on that day, you shall pay.
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I Remember

Contributed by silent on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 12:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Alone in my room i start to cry
Thinking of how i want to die
There is no point in going on
The heart is weak, but the head is strong

I will survive to pay you back
Tied down, day after day upon that rack
You turned the wheel so very slow
Silently grinning, your demons grow

Killing me with such vile games
Filling me full of pointless rage
You waited too long to let yours out
Then i came along to let you shout

You cannot be sad for what you made
Your creation I am, your demons unslaid
Living in darkness, looking at light
As you age, the less you fight

Feel your crushed dreams, torn hatred
Twisted dark games, feel what was taken
You payed me back for being your son
I was created for you to love, not betray
And from within your heart you did slay
My hopes and dreams, but thrice as bad
But it won't be long, so don't be sad

My frozen rage, will thaw one day
And on that day, you shall pay.

Copyright © silent ... [ 2004-03-07 00:40:59]
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Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:10:42 AM AEST
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What a sad write. I just hope that things look up for you soon. Remember every cloud has a silver lining be more positive to life and find your silver lining. Keep smiling from bernard

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by EmersonV on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:47:08 AM AEST
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wow.
pretty dark write.
i like how the flow of the poem gets bitter. cool.

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