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Array ( [sid] => 37613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my perfect world.. . [time] => 2004-03-06 18:36:28 [hometext] => just read if you like it comment if not comment dont really matter its mine [bodytext] => in a perfect world,
i could fight for dear life,
and get the girl,
i could fill her neck,
with diamonds and pearls,
i could live forever,
least outlive my sorrows,
and i would always be able to,
kiss you tomorrow,
i could be what i wanted to be,
i could make hundreds of thousands a year,
and i could go to sleep everynight,
without any fear,
isnt it wierd,
that the goals we think,
that we cant reach,
are right there in our grasp,
but we dont believe,
these things that i say,
i hope you take heed,
cause these words arent just spoken,
they are said to teach. .. .

you make your own perfect world. . .. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 43 [informant] => nate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
my perfect world.. .

Contributed by nate on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:36:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



in a perfect world,
i could fight for dear life,
and get the girl,
i could fill her neck,
with diamonds and pearls,
i could live forever,
least outlive my sorrows,
and i would always be able to,
kiss you tomorrow,
i could be what i wanted to be,
i could make hundreds of thousands a year,
and i could go to sleep everynight,
without any fear,
isnt it wierd,
that the goals we think,
that we cant reach,
are right there in our grasp,
but we dont believe,
these things that i say,
i hope you take heed,
cause these words arent just spoken,
they are said to teach. .. .

you make your own perfect world. . ..




Copyright © nate ... [ 2004-03-06 18:36:28]
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Re: my perfect world.. . (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:30:21 PM AEST
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Such honesty. "You make your own perfect world", great ending. It fits perfectly. *S* Cynthia


Re: my perfect world.. . (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:19:07 AM AEST
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hmm, in fact life is simple..and world could be a erfect one for each of us, only if we weren¨t used to live inside our boxes and weren¨t scared to take a peek out and catch the life that runs around.
nevertheless, there are ppl who have all what you listed, and they have even more, but they are not happy anyways...that means something ;)

jeanie




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