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Array ( [sid] => 37602 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Problem [time] => 2004-03-06 16:30:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your are my problem
You are my end
You are a hundred
How could I defend

Why do you whisper
Obscenities at night
You are like a blister
Removable only by knife

How can you say you love me
How can you say you tried
Why do you think you can see
My problems when you lied

So sublime
Liar
Invade
Liar
Take whats mine

I am so confused
How can you one thing
Say I was never used
All my error; Where does it begin

Living this life a false dream
A fatal twist of irony
A final piercing scream
Your lies, a twist of humanity

Remember me, when I pull the trigger
I dont have gun just yet,
As I cock the hammer I'll snigger
At that point at my best
SHut the ***** up and never forget
This is what you created [comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 13 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Problem

Contributed by alecfernadez on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 04:30:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Your are my problem
You are my end
You are a hundred
How could I defend

Why do you whisper
Obscenities at night
You are like a blister
Removable only by knife

How can you say you love me
How can you say you tried
Why do you think you can see
My problems when you lied

So sublime
Liar
Invade
Liar
Take whats mine

I am so confused
How can you one thing
Say I was never used
All my error; Where does it begin

Living this life a false dream
A fatal twist of irony
A final piercing scream
Your lies, a twist of humanity

Remember me, when I pull the trigger
I dont have gun just yet,
As I cock the hammer I'll snigger
At that point at my best
SHut the ***** up and never forget
This is what you created

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-03-06 16:30:07]
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Re: Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 12:03:15 PM AEST
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thankyou very much for not commenting, I'm takin my work elsewhere, peace

Re: Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:50:26 PM AEST
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very dark. i liked this alot. nicely done.
Arden

Re: Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:29:45 PM AEST
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i just wish you the best for the future, you very good at this kind of thing!

your peom was excellent.

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