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Array ( [sid] => 3755 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In a Blink of an eye [time] => 2002-09-12 19:49:42 [hometext] => to all those who need some advice in hope to a different direction [bodytext] => In a blink of an eye your life can be taken,
In a blink of an eye your heart can be left breakin
With one wrong decison you can be left all alone,
With one wrong decision you can be put in the wrong zone
Leavin one problem go untreated,
Leaves more problems undefeated
Pullin away from those who care,
Pulls you further away from those who want to be there
Feelin like this is where you belong,
Feelin like you cant do any wrong
Givin up on the things that matter the most,
Givin up for just a little toast
For gettin important dates that mean something to others,
Forgettin important dates to remain beneath the covers
Not realizin in time you'll want to change,
Not realizin in time its to late to rearrange
Now you feel the pain and no bodys around,
Now you feel the pain as you lie beneath the ground [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Justice3310 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

In a Blink of an eye

Contributed by Justice3310 on Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 07:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

In a blink of an eye your life can be taken,
In a blink of an eye your heart can be left breakin
With one wrong decison you can be left all alone,
With one wrong decision you can be put in the wrong zone
Leavin one problem go untreated,
Leaves more problems undefeated
Pullin away from those who care,
Pulls you further away from those who want to be there
Feelin like this is where you belong,
Feelin like you cant do any wrong
Givin up on the things that matter the most,
Givin up for just a little toast
For gettin important dates that mean something to others,
Forgettin important dates to remain beneath the covers
Not realizin in time you'll want to change,
Not realizin in time its to late to rearrange
Now you feel the pain and no bodys around,
Now you feel the pain as you lie beneath the ground

Copyright © Justice3310 ... [ 2002-09-12 19:49:42]
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Re: In a Blink of an eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:34:06 AM AEST
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how very true, another wonderful write, thanks for sharing,

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