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noone's stopping you from leaving
there isn't a reason to
but I have to go
get me out of here
just let me out
God follows me in my wake
watches what I am doing
where I am going
but always behind me
never beside me
I can't get out
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Beside Me

Contributed by Barky on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:27:19 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Imagine being in a place where you can never leave
noone's stopping you from leaving
there isn't a reason to
but I have to go
get me out of here
just let me out
God follows me in my wake
watches what I am doing
where I am going
but always behind me
never beside me
I can't get out
let me go

Copyright © Barky ... [ 2004-03-06 02:27:19]
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Re: Beside Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:22:19 AM AEST
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Nice job. I think I understand it fairly well.
But you need to actually let go, and God (who is keeping near you) will catch you. I have prayed for strength to do or not do so many things, but I can never do them. Just pray to let go. let yourself fall. You'll be caught.
Did I get anywhere near the mark?
Andrew

Re: Beside Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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a sort of paranoid awkwardness with self and
fear of not being in control?
claustaphobia plays a part for me.

good.

Re: Beside Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:42:35 PM AEST
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This poem called out to me. So many times I have locked myself away knowing I could get out but not wanting too. Enjoyed reading this one immensely. Kie

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