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Array ( [sid] => 37498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unexpected [time] => 2004-03-05 18:25:42 [hometext] => This happened on Sunday and I just had to share. Didn't think it would ever happen. [bodytext] => Quietly she walks in, is he still sleeping?
She walks slowly over to the bed;
He opens his sleepy eyes and smiles.
Oh how much she loves him and he knows.
But will he ever say the words?
He reaches up, pulling her down,
Wraps his arms around her, sighing deeply,
Snuggling into the mattress,
he says “I Love You”.
She looks up into his eyes letting him read for
Himself what she is feeling at that moment.
“I have never met anyone like you. I am glad that I have found you. I don’t want you to go anywhere. Do you know how long I have wanted to say that. I Love You”.
She can’t believe it, her dream came true.
He does care, he loves her.
“I love you too and I am not going anywhere”.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 2 [informant] => CountryGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Unexpected

Contributed by CountryGirl on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:25:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Quietly she walks in, is he still sleeping?
She walks slowly over to the bed;
He opens his sleepy eyes and smiles.
Oh how much she loves him and he knows.
But will he ever say the words?
He reaches up, pulling her down,
Wraps his arms around her, sighing deeply,
Snuggling into the mattress,
he says “I Love You”.
She looks up into his eyes letting him read for
Himself what she is feeling at that moment.
“I have never met anyone like you. I am glad that I have found you. I don’t want you to go anywhere. Do you know how long I have wanted to say that. I Love You”.
She can’t believe it, her dream came true.
He does care, he loves her.
“I love you too and I am not going anywhere”.

Copyright Â© CountryGirl ... [ 2004-03-05 18:25:42]
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Re: Unexpected (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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there is still love in the world!

nice one.

wildejohnny

Re: Unexpected (User Rating: 1 )
by SirensLight on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:31:02 PM AEST
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This reminds me so much of my bf, thank you for writng and posting it as it brings back so many happy memories.

Re: Unexpected (User Rating: 1 )
by LornyaNarFuinenya on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:03:19 PM AEST
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Nice job, I am happy for you, i wish it would happen for me, i .loved mine a long time too and he knows it. oh well, nice poem though i liked it.

Re: Unexpected (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:22:52 AM AEST
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Awwwwww........... how sweet! Actually when I first read the title and what you put there, I thought it is probably some sort of silly matters or accidents for a laugh, but god this is so sweet!!! You really brought a smile upon my face, thank you...... (hehe, now I am going to call my girl and say that word to her now!)^_^

Re: Unexpected (User Rating: 1 )
by karl_wiggins on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:57:55 PM AEST
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Excellent!

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