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Array ( [sid] => 37464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With us always [time] => 2004-03-05 14:19:45 [hometext] => a poem i wrote while trying to deal with a recent miscarriage. [bodytext] => When I lost you so suddenly
The hurt was just so bad
I could only think of the pain I felt when I couldn’t be your mommy
I didn’t stop to think of dad
I’m sure he’s hurting too
There’s so much of you I got to feel
But what’s a dad to do?
And how’s he suppose to heal?
Nothing’s ever hurt so much
To have a life inside of me
And never get to hold or touch
Your face I never even got to see
But me and daddy feel some joy
Even though we didn’t even know if you were a girl or boy
That one day we will be together
For you are with Jesus now
And we will spend all of our forever
I know this much God allows
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With us always

Contributed by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:19:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

When I lost you so suddenly
The hurt was just so bad
I could only think of the pain I felt when I couldn’t be your mommy
I didn’t stop to think of dad
I’m sure he’s hurting too
There’s so much of you I got to feel
But what’s a dad to do?
And how’s he suppose to heal?
Nothing’s ever hurt so much
To have a life inside of me
And never get to hold or touch
Your face I never even got to see
But me and daddy feel some joy
Even though we didn’t even know if you were a girl or boy
That one day we will be together
For you are with Jesus now
And we will spend all of our forever
I know this much God allows

Copyright Â© Kristina_Simpson_Stewart ... [ 2004-03-05 14:19:45]
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Re: With us always (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:28:44 PM AEST
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ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! THAT HAS SO MUCH HEART!! SORRY FOR THE 3 OF YOU & MAY GOD BLESS ALL 3 OF YOU!!!
DAN!!!!

Re: With us always (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:42:14 PM AEST
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oh, kristina! im so sorry for your loss, i lost one baby and one set of twins and still it hurts, but i know too i will see them one day, all our little doves fly over the rainbow now, much big love, again im so sorry, beautiful moving poem in tribute to your lill sweetie:) hugs, nessa

Re: With us always (User Rating: 1 )
by CountryGirl on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:31:59 PM AEST
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This went straight to the heart. I got tears in my eyes. I have had 2 miscarriages. It's not easy getting over especially the furthur along you are. My heart goes with you and the daddy. Keep the faith..it was meant to be and there will always be a second chance.

God Bless!

Re: With us always (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:03:14 PM AEST
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I share your pain, Kristina... I also did not think about the Dad's feeling for a while....
Beautifully written..
Hugs
Jenni

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