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Array ( [sid] => 37431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear YOU [time] => 2004-03-05 05:20:43 [hometext] => I wrote this for a friend of mine about her son [bodytext] => Dear You

It was hard when I was little
With a dad who’s just like you
When your heart is just so brittle
I wish you only knew

I see myself in your son's eyes
As I call you on the phone
I say my last goodbyes
Do you wonder if I feel alone

One giant tear on my cheek
As more messages I leave
Why don’t you want to speak
Don’t you wonder why I grieve

For you, I hope you play
Those messages I spoke
I said “Mom I love you” today
And really it’s no joke

Everyday I wonder what I did
For you to leave me here
Remember mom that I am your only kid
And in my heart you left a spear

I know you have a car
You have cell phone too
I don’t know where you are
But you know my love is true

I am a boy and yes I am tough
That is what I am supposed to be
But God calls me by my bluff
Why is it only him that can see

Please mommy take my glasses
And see what I conceive
I see as my whole life passes
With a mom that don’t believe

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 48 [informant] => des [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Dear YOU

Contributed by des on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:20:43 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Dear You

It was hard when I was little
With a dad who’s just like you
When your heart is just so brittle
I wish you only knew

I see myself in your son's eyes
As I call you on the phone
I say my last goodbyes
Do you wonder if I feel alone

One giant tear on my cheek
As more messages I leave
Why don’t you want to speak
Don’t you wonder why I grieve

For you, I hope you play
Those messages I spoke
I said “Mom I love you” today
And really it’s no joke

Everyday I wonder what I did
For you to leave me here
Remember mom that I am your only kid
And in my heart you left a spear

I know you have a car
You have cell phone too
I don’t know where you are
But you know my love is true

I am a boy and yes I am tough
That is what I am supposed to be
But God calls me by my bluff
Why is it only him that can see

Please mommy take my glasses
And see what I conceive
I see as my whole life passes
With a mom that don’t believe

Copyright Â© des ... [ 2004-03-05 05:20:43]
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Re: Dear YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:54:09 AM AEST
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"Remember mom that I am your only kid
And in my heart you left a spear"..very strong line..very touching poem.. venkat

Re: Dear YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:52:54 AM AEST
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aw sad i hope things get better for you, i really like your style of writting

Re: Dear YOU (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:27:42 PM AEST
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i know how you feel if this poem is true for some reason my mom always thinks that I want some thing when i tell her i love her. so great poem!!!! i look forward to seeing more of your work!!!! AMBER HOTTENSTEIN :)

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