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Array ( [sid] => 37354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Routine [time] => 2004-03-04 17:58:18 [hometext] => From a book Im putting together. Just want to know what u think b4 I publish it *4 those who dont know, I used to be suicidal. Not any more though. * [bodytext] => Every day
A set routine
Every day the same.

Cutting, stinging
Flowing, bleeding
All of this I feel.

First the knife,
in my hand,
steady as I go.

Then the sweet
taste of pain
as it bites into my flesh.

Next the numbing feeling
that sweeps over me,
as I sink to the floor.

Then the red
that fills my sight
mingled with the black.

Next the black takes over
my sight, leaving me
blind and empty.

Last I wake, to find me
in this world again.
Then the routine begins again.

Exerpt From; Twisted Mind-- Diary Of A Suicide [comments] => 4 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Routine

Contributed by Elf on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:58:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Every day
A set routine
Every day the same.

Cutting, stinging
Flowing, bleeding
All of this I feel.

First the knife,
in my hand,
steady as I go.

Then the sweet
taste of pain
as it bites into my flesh.

Next the numbing feeling
that sweeps over me,
as I sink to the floor.

Then the red
that fills my sight
mingled with the black.

Next the black takes over
my sight, leaving me
blind and empty.

Last I wake, to find me
in this world again.
Then the routine begins again.

Exerpt From; Twisted Mind-- Diary Of A Suicide

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2004-03-04 17:58:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Routine (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:00:52 PM AEST
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not you, but just thinking - can't you only be suicidal once? i mean to really succeed in being a true sucidal... ah, never mind. good write ya got here. hope that book takes you places!! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Routine (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:14:45 PM AEST
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I could definately relate to this...great job!

Re: Routine (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:16:09 PM AEST
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A twisted mind indeed.

Re: Routine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:32:18 PM AEST
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interesting book might be worth a read......

wildejohnny.

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