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Array ( [sid] => 37340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => midnight [time] => 2004-03-04 17:01:19 [hometext] => a love poem... [bodytext] => I tiptoe through these graveyards, these secret places in my heart, inside your palm,
Tracing my fingers along the stones, my skirt trailing through puddles of tears for people unknown,
And I write stories to these stone angels, and watch frozen memories seep from their eyes,
As I whisper your name with their voices, once again, one last time.
I lie amongst these wilted flowers, crushed velvet, and I pick a rose for you -
Deep red, each frozen drop of blood I bleed to hold you.
A hundred thousand offerings through these glass raindrops, these stories on my skin I drew,
I smile black memories, chained to your spider web; I surrender to a heart so true.
These chains that tie my ankles bind my body unto yours,
And with this knife, I sacrifice, I drink your soul, these feelings so pure,
I lick away your immortal tears to live forever, to stop you hurting any more -
This everlasting ache inside my soul, to be with you the only cure.
I worship your life, you are the god I pray to, every night
As I lie between these gravestones, with these tears of blood I cry,
You take the bullet, so gently, from between my eyes,
And silently, I worship you, until the end of time…

…midnight…
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midnight

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:01:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I tiptoe through these graveyards, these secret places in my heart, inside your palm,
Tracing my fingers along the stones, my skirt trailing through puddles of tears for people unknown,
And I write stories to these stone angels, and watch frozen memories seep from their eyes,
As I whisper your name with their voices, once again, one last time.
I lie amongst these wilted flowers, crushed velvet, and I pick a rose for you -
Deep red, each frozen drop of blood I bleed to hold you.
A hundred thousand offerings through these glass raindrops, these stories on my skin I drew,
I smile black memories, chained to your spider web; I surrender to a heart so true.
These chains that tie my ankles bind my body unto yours,
And with this knife, I sacrifice, I drink your soul, these feelings so pure,
I lick away your immortal tears to live forever, to stop you hurting any more -
This everlasting ache inside my soul, to be with you the only cure.
I worship your life, you are the god I pray to, every night
As I lie between these gravestones, with these tears of blood I cry,
You take the bullet, so gently, from between my eyes,
And silently, I worship you, until the end of time…

…midnight…




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Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:08:12 PM AEST
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whoa... lovely AND dark, you been watching a vampire movie or something?!? lol.. excellent writing! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:08:01 PM AEST
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lucie honey this is an amazing poem! exquisitly breathtakingly beautiful............ wow and wow:) hugs n' love, always nessa xxx...


Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:36:22 PM AEST
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Oh my lordy... everything you write just astonishes me. HOW DO YOU DO IT??? Clearly... another fantastic write.

~ Moonlit


Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:28:05 PM AEST
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WOW. Amazing poem. I absolutely fell in love with your descriptions. Absolutely wonderful.


Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:43:41 PM AEST
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Hmmm this left me speechless also.
Wow that is heavy thought put to paper..

Whisper


Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 05:58:00 PM AEST
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Amazing...simply amazing. A masterpeice of darkness.

Very well done
Roses
Larry


Re: midnight (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:46:16 AM AEST
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wow this had a nice vampirish element to it. I loved your writing and I wish I could only write a fraction of how good u write, but I guess thats not really possible. I loved the flow of this it was brilliant as well as the imagery.

Bobo (Joel)




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