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Array ( [sid] => 37334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I miss you [time] => 2004-03-04 16:21:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I miss you like I miss the
wind benath our wings.
Like I miss the sunlight hitting the trees,
Now I only wish I could understand those special things.

I miss your hand touching mine,
and you were breathtaking.
And When you said
that everything would be fine.

I miss the cold wind blowing in my hair,
and still would make me warm.
Now I understand,
there were never any time to spare.

I miss the could nights,
when only you could do me warm,
Those special moments,
like when I thought that nothing could do me harm.

But I do not need wings,
when I do not want to fly.
The only who can ever teach me, is you.

And I do not want to see the sunlight,
when I do not have your eyes to look with.
The only one I want to look with, is you.

And I do not need touch,
when you are not there to touch me.
The only one I want touch of, is you.

And I do not need wind in my hair,
when you are not there to blow it away.
The only storm i need, is you

And I do not need warmth,
when you are not there to hold me warm.
The only sun I need, is you.

I wish you could come back
and give me one last try.
I promise with all of my heart,
I would never make you cry. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 796 [topic] => 22 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I miss you

Contributed by gothicangel on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:21:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I miss you like I miss the
wind benath our wings.
Like I miss the sunlight hitting the trees,
Now I only wish I could understand those special things.

I miss your hand touching mine,
and you were breathtaking.
And When you said
that everything would be fine.

I miss the cold wind blowing in my hair,
and still would make me warm.
Now I understand,
there were never any time to spare.

I miss the could nights,
when only you could do me warm,
Those special moments,
like when I thought that nothing could do me harm.

But I do not need wings,
when I do not want to fly.
The only who can ever teach me, is you.

And I do not want to see the sunlight,
when I do not have your eyes to look with.
The only one I want to look with, is you.

And I do not need touch,
when you are not there to touch me.
The only one I want touch of, is you.

And I do not need wind in my hair,
when you are not there to blow it away.
The only storm i need, is you

And I do not need warmth,
when you are not there to hold me warm.
The only sun I need, is you.

I wish you could come back
and give me one last try.
I promise with all of my heart,
I would never make you cry.

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-03-04 16:21:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:37:28 PM AEST
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This is darling, hope the recipient receives it well... good writing! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:39:15 PM AEST
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sooo sad :( very nicly written. good job keep it up.
Arden

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:31:24 PM AEST
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A truely wonderful poem!!! I love it alot! I wish he will come back to you too, bless your heart!

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 07:32:13 AM AEST
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thanks, i love to hear the respons from you=)

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:03:21 AM AEST
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beautiful poem needs to be in a hallmark card.. it is a wonderful feeling being with someone to share life with. and have them near. It sure does hurt when your not with them.. I hope things work out for you.. i feel your pain... sandy

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by Chilibear on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:15:23 PM AEST
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That's a really beautiful poem, and I can totally relate. Keep up the GREAT work!

- Chilibear

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:01:27 PM AEST
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i know what thats like... great poem

wayne

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