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Array ( [sid] => 37321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Going unnoticed [time] => 2004-03-04 14:17:01 [hometext] => Everything isnt always perfect [bodytext] => Take a look in my eyes
Do I seem like a nobody
Read my yelling lips and tell me
Do I speak like a somebody

My life is full of pain and suet
From the ashes of a burning soul
My body aches from anger
From the things I don’t know

I just need someone to hold
A person who has a heart
That’s not black and bruised
From a life that’s ripping away

I’m reaching from this dark room
Towards the light of my escape
Please tell me I don’t need help
Even though my life has been raped

My veins are full of blood
That flows in a stream of bones
Which turn my eyes to notice
That the reflection in the mirror no one knows

Clean my bleeding wounds
With salt mixed liquor
Rub my blood on my soul
And let them dry together

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jc_92024 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Going unnoticed

Contributed by jc_92024 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Take a look in my eyes
Do I seem like a nobody
Read my yelling lips and tell me
Do I speak like a somebody

My life is full of pain and suet
From the ashes of a burning soul
My body aches from anger
From the things I don’t know

I just need someone to hold
A person who has a heart
That’s not black and bruised
From a life that’s ripping away

I’m reaching from this dark room
Towards the light of my escape
Please tell me I don’t need help
Even though my life has been raped

My veins are full of blood
That flows in a stream of bones
Which turn my eyes to notice
That the reflection in the mirror no one knows

Clean my bleeding wounds
With salt mixed liquor
Rub my blood on my soul
And let them dry together

Copyright Â© jc_92024 ... [ 2004-03-04 14:17:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Going unnoticed (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:28:58 PM AEST
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good writing... i liked this :)

Re: Going unnoticed (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:47:23 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net...
Good write..
Jenni

Re: Going unnoticed (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poetry2404 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:06:48 PM AEST
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wow. i really like that one. good job. keep writing.
~*~silent tears, silent cries, silent fears~*~
darkpoetry

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