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painting the truth in different colors
subtle shades, pastels
muted by expressions
favored in the soft light
wanting to make a good impression
limited edition
a fresh canvas awaits
a pallette of life
the tangled limbs
in my minds eye
waiting for
the first brush stroke
stained with imperfection
what color is attraction
affection, passion
warm colors poured
over eager flesh
with joyous laughter
the beginning of a masterpiece

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portrait of lovers

Contributed by merry on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

_____________________________
painting the truth in different colors
subtle shades, pastels
muted by expressions
favored in the soft light
wanting to make a good impression
limited edition
a fresh canvas awaits
a pallette of life
the tangled limbs
in my minds eye
waiting for
the first brush stroke
stained with imperfection
what color is attraction
affection, passion
warm colors poured
over eager flesh
with joyous laughter
the beginning of a masterpiece

gmm 2004

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Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:28:49 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE

Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:30:49 PM AEST
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wow, gaille, stunning, beautiful, breathtakingly awesome poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:24:30 PM AEST
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yes yes yes!!......thats exactly how it is Gaille.

You have such an insight into life it amazes me.

Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:31:22 PM AEST
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This poem brought a drum beat of excitement to my heart. Dang, it sounds awesome.... Kie

Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:51:22 PM AEST
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love this, this is amazing.

Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:20:36 PM AEST
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This made me go "Ohhh." LOVE the last line.
Stitch

Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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wow awesome write! i really love this. great job!
Arden

Re: portrait of lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by FallenAngel300 on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:32:02 PM AEST
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wow... thats all i have to say, wow! amazing, i love this line "stained with imperfection". so are u an artist to?

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