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Array ( [sid] => 3727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hatred's Permanent Imprint [time] => 2002-09-12 06:08:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hatred's Permanent Imprint

Dark merlot stained fingers varnished with a rains muddied downpour,
The rage of a fierce silent battled wars siren red
Toes and fingertips worn bloody from rancid territory,
Calloused palms,
A permanent imprint of a revolvers trigger,
The death of human flesh, buried beneath the cracked paths we now tread.

A bullets whistle and platinum blurred hesitation
The young men’s desperation to return home as one by one each fell with pride
The destined soldiers tears shed for freedom,
Blood shot eyes,
A permanent imprint of fears forbidden wake,
The death of innocent souls, buried within a crimson night.

A green velvet coat wavering subtly in the breeze
Soft sun beamed curls floating untouched amongst wars heated battle as detests fed
One small girl conquering one division of a nation
Peace showing its face,
A permanent imprint on life’s testimony of true will
The death of a nation’s victory, buried within the grave of what hatred willingly bred. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 28 [informant] => Dragons_Of_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Patriotic )
Hatred's Permanent Imprint

Contributed by Dragons_Of_Rose on Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 06:08:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Patriotic



Hatred's Permanent Imprint

Dark merlot stained fingers varnished with a rains muddied downpour,
The rage of a fierce silent battled wars siren red
Toes and fingertips worn bloody from rancid territory,
Calloused palms,
A permanent imprint of a revolvers trigger,
The death of human flesh, buried beneath the cracked paths we now tread.

A bullets whistle and platinum blurred hesitation
The young men’s desperation to return home as one by one each fell with pride
The destined soldiers tears shed for freedom,
Blood shot eyes,
A permanent imprint of fears forbidden wake,
The death of innocent souls, buried within a crimson night.

A green velvet coat wavering subtly in the breeze
Soft sun beamed curls floating untouched amongst wars heated battle as detests fed
One small girl conquering one division of a nation
Peace showing its face,
A permanent imprint on life’s testimony of true will
The death of a nation’s victory, buried within the grave of what hatred willingly bred.




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Re: Hatred's Permanent Imprint (User Rating: 1 )
by J_Ganey on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 07:17:34 AM AEST
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how could anyone ingnore such splendid work by you, well at least now it's not on the least read list anymore

I love you, my angel


Re: Hatred's Permanent Imprint (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 11:03:08 AM AEST
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I like this one, it made me read word by word so that I could understand, continue to write the way you do!




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