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sweet caresses,
smooth, soft skin,
getting lost in you
feels beautiful.

Love-filled smile,
adoring kisses,
sleek and swift,
your lips entrance me
in harmony.

A nibble here,
a playful bite there,
seeing you,
touching you,
my knees feel weak.

Our love is pure,
full of truth,
bursting with care,
our hearts belong
together as one. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => vampy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

One Beating Heart

Contributed by vampy on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:52:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Lullaby whispers,
sweet caresses,
smooth, soft skin,
getting lost in you
feels beautiful.

Love-filled smile,
adoring kisses,
sleek and swift,
your lips entrance me
in harmony.

A nibble here,
a playful bite there,
seeing you,
touching you,
my knees feel weak.

Our love is pure,
full of truth,
bursting with care,
our hearts belong
together as one.

Copyright © vampy ... [ 2004-03-03 22:52:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One Beating Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:56:55 PM AEST
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ahh reminded me of my last girlfriend and the feeling i had when she was near. thanks for the memories, your friend doug

Re: One Beating Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:22:14 PM AEST
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thisi s really really nice, and i agree it does brieng back old memories...slr

Re: One Beating Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by SpazzyMcGlee on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:28:06 AM AEST
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you have a very unique writing style. I like it. your poem was beautiful...i can almost feel what you're feeling through the words.

Re: One Beating Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:02:01 AM AEST
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a lovely breath of sweetness, great style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: One Beating Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:49:34 AM AEST
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THAT'S GOT A SWEET KIND OF BEAT TO IT!
WRITTEN REALLY WELL,TOO!!
DAN!!!

Re: One Beating Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:01:48 PM AEST
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I like the sound of the words to describe your bliss.

Perfect little bit fluff.

Whisper

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