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Array ( [sid] => 37245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Pity You At Last [time] => 2004-03-03 20:47:55 [hometext] => So sad when a marriage crumbles and all that's left are wishes [bodytext] => i pity you, at last
my estranged man
but do confess
that each morning
i awaken with a prayer
upon my lips that God
looks mercifully upon you
and gives you happiness
health and much success

in the midst of all
the hell i find myself
entombed in being
at your side i still
wish for you every
good thing i would
want for myself

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I Pity You At Last

Contributed by faithmairee on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

i pity you, at last
my estranged man
but do confess
that each morning
i awaken with a prayer
upon my lips that God
looks mercifully upon you
and gives you happiness
health and much success

in the midst of all
the hell i find myself
entombed in being
at your side i still
wish for you every
good thing i would
want for myself

Copyright Â© faithmairee ... [ 2004-03-03 20:47:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Pity You At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:12:32 PM AEST
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I truly liked this.....very good emotional write

Well done
Roses
Larry

Re: I Pity You At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:09:29 PM AEST
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You have a giving heart and a great outlook. I really enjoy reading your poems you have a way of getting right to the point but leading the reader to wonder where the next stanza is heading. Very talented you are. Kie

Re: I Pity You At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:37:08 PM AEST
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your quite amazing to me for it seems most people despise their ex. however you wish yours happiness . you are a wise and kind spirit. great poem and great attitude , your friend doug

Re: I Pity You At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by ammalu on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:13:39 AM AEST
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good expression - good heart - keep it up.

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