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I feel all-alone
I don’t want lectures
I don’t want a sermon
I only want a place to rant

My dreams are clouded over
I feel so hopeless
Don’t you lecture me
Don’t you give me a lecture
I just want to be heard

I am screaming so loud
But no one hears
Don’t turn this into a debate
Just hear me
Just care

March 1st 2004

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Dont!

Contributed by lil_angel on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 05:52:46 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

My hope is fading
I feel all-alone
I don’t want lectures
I don’t want a sermon
I only want a place to rant

My dreams are clouded over
I feel so hopeless
Don’t you lecture me
Don’t you give me a lecture
I just want to be heard

I am screaming so loud
But no one hears
Don’t turn this into a debate
Just hear me
Just care

March 1st 2004

Copyright Â© lil_angel ... [ 2004-03-03 17:52:46]
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Re: Dont! (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:30:38 PM AEST
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He always hears and cares. He doesn't mind if you rant, and He won't lecture, but slowly help you to see the best answer. I love the things you write at 3 a.m.
Stitch

Re: Dont! (User Rating: 1 )
by LornyaNarFuinenya on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:54:15 PM AEST
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I HEAR YOU!! GREAT WRITE you can pm me if ya like dearie!! I get lectures all the time too and they are TIRING AREN'T THEY??? have a great day!!

Re: Dont! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:33:05 PM AEST
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It's amazing whay you can come out with at 3am! good write.

wildejohnny.

Re: Dont! (User Rating: 1 )
by SpazzyMcGlee on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:35:41 AM AEST
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i liked your poem. i can really identify that and i like that. you dont hide your meaning at all and i like that too. i think its great.

Re: Dont! (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:58:54 PM AEST
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ooh.. ive soo been there.. good write :)
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Dont! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:15:59 PM AEST
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Clouds and dreams--I understand the combination of those two items!

Excellent , interesting write...very crisp and to the point. Maybe it's because the emotion is similar to feelings I've had recently, but in the crisp writing the emotion comes through. Nice!

Autumn

Re: Dont! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:57:16 AM AEST
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Another good one.
luv, huggs,
emy

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