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Array ( [sid] => 3710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal Smile [time] => 2002-09-11 19:23:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dreams shatter
Like a mirror's
Broken glass
Thoughts and fantasies
Never more to last.

Shards lay
Upon the dusty ground
Memories and love
Lost upon the wind
Quickly fly away.

Blood pools
Next to the head
Near a hand
With a smoking gun
A shell falls to the floor.

Eternal smile
Upon a bloodied face
Laughing at those
Who brought this disgrace
The herse goes mile after mile.

Tears fall
Upon the wooden casket
Frowns upon the pale white face
A dirt clod thrown
Another life, ended.

By Kenneth Williams [comments] => 5 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 32 [informant] => ZeroCool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Eternal Smile

Contributed by ZeroCool on Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 07:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Dreams shatter
Like a mirror's
Broken glass
Thoughts and fantasies
Never more to last.

Shards lay
Upon the dusty ground
Memories and love
Lost upon the wind
Quickly fly away.

Blood pools
Next to the head
Near a hand
With a smoking gun
A shell falls to the floor.

Eternal smile
Upon a bloodied face
Laughing at those
Who brought this disgrace
The herse goes mile after mile.

Tears fall
Upon the wooden casket
Frowns upon the pale white face
A dirt clod thrown
Another life, ended.

By Kenneth Williams




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Re: Eternal Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 05:40:46 AM AEST
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Grim and unfortunately realistic. Well written, keep up the good work.


Re: Eternal Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by ZeroCool on Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 06:12:27 PM AEST
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Most of my poetry has a realistic tone to it. I choose not to right many grim poems, many of them have sent people into tears just reading them.


Re: Eternal Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 08:43:24 PM AEST
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beautiful poem


Re: Eternal Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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Another mothers' son
comes under the gun
in the games in life they play.

nice read,
wordsy.


Re: Eternal Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by ZeroCool on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 02:37:35 AM AEST
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So is yours ;)




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