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Array ( [sid] => 37001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => she never knew [time] => 2004-03-02 01:47:54 [hometext] => this poem touches me and i hope it toeches you..... its my true feeling no lies [bodytext] => She never knew six would be the sadest year of her life
She never knew life was that short
she never knew that daddy was going to say good bye
She never knew the meaning of death till daddy fell asleep for a long time
She never really understood the meaning of heaven till mommy told her
But still she didn 't like it or the meaning of it.....
She still never knew couse she didn't want to

She did know that daddy was gone and wished she could of gone with him.....

But never did she know till now..... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 48 [informant] => rayray [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

she never knew

Contributed by rayray on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:47:54 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She never knew six would be the sadest year of her life
She never knew life was that short
she never knew that daddy was going to say good bye
She never knew the meaning of death till daddy fell asleep for a long time
She never really understood the meaning of heaven till mommy told her
But still she didn 't like it or the meaning of it.....
She still never knew couse she didn't want to

She did know that daddy was gone and wished she could of gone with him.....

But never did she know till now.....

Copyright © rayray ... [ 2004-03-02 01:47:54]
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Re: she never knew (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:51:47 AM AEST
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This was so sad....very well written though!

Re: she never knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:57:42 AM AEST
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What a very vivid, sad, well-said piece. I felt the sorrow in this. Great job.
Take care,
Andrew

Re: she never knew (User Rating: 1 )
by CrackerJack on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:34:40 AM AEST
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Oh, how sad!! I like it!

Re: she never knew (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poetry2404 on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:43:04 AM AEST
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wow. that was sad and very touching. it actually makes me think twice about suicide. i really like it. keep writing
darkpoetry

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