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Array ( [sid] => 36904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Third Chance [time] => 2004-03-01 10:01:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You walked out the door
With-out a good-bye
You said no second chances
Not even a second try

Now I'm sitting here alone
Wondering what I did wrong
Next thing I know
The radio's playing his song

Two lovers fall in love
And the other falls away
I don't want to here that now
Because I want to make you stay

He came into my life
But you're already here
Now I'm all alone
And that's my biggest fear

He caught me unaware
And took me for all I had
I don't know why I did it
But I know why you're so mad

You said I got what I wanted
But thar is where you're wrong
All I want is you
That's what I've wanted for so long

I don't want him
You know that I want you
So don't tell me what I have
Because I still don't have you

If we could just get back together
Nothing will ever happen again
When I lost you I lost my world
It feels to me like a mortal sin

Life is worth living
When I'm living it for you
And now that you're gone
My life is simply through

No more smiles, no more laughs
Without you, that's all the past
The crazy thing is
It all happened so fast

One minute we're together
The next I'm lying down
He took my life away
And in my tears I think I'll drown

I told you what had happened
I could not live if I did not
You said I wasn't worth it
And didn't give it another thought

Was I not worth the pain
Or not worth the trouble
Or was I not worth anything
Or anything doubled

Me and you
Him and I
Me, myself
That's how I'll die

No third chances
Not even a second try
Those were your words
You never lie

So I'll stop these thoughts
I'll stop my life
Here's my throat
And there's the knife

No third chances
No second try
I'll say these words
And then I'll die

I had my once
And you did too
I'll follow your words
How about you

When you find my thoughts
You will find my heart
No life after
No second start [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 36 [informant] => aural_b [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
No Third Chance

Contributed by aural_b on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:01:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



You walked out the door
With-out a good-bye
You said no second chances
Not even a second try

Now I'm sitting here alone
Wondering what I did wrong
Next thing I know
The radio's playing his song

Two lovers fall in love
And the other falls away
I don't want to here that now
Because I want to make you stay

He came into my life
But you're already here
Now I'm all alone
And that's my biggest fear

He caught me unaware
And took me for all I had
I don't know why I did it
But I know why you're so mad

You said I got what I wanted
But thar is where you're wrong
All I want is you
That's what I've wanted for so long

I don't want him
You know that I want you
So don't tell me what I have
Because I still don't have you

If we could just get back together
Nothing will ever happen again
When I lost you I lost my world
It feels to me like a mortal sin

Life is worth living
When I'm living it for you
And now that you're gone
My life is simply through

No more smiles, no more laughs
Without you, that's all the past
The crazy thing is
It all happened so fast

One minute we're together
The next I'm lying down
He took my life away
And in my tears I think I'll drown

I told you what had happened
I could not live if I did not
You said I wasn't worth it
And didn't give it another thought

Was I not worth the pain
Or not worth the trouble
Or was I not worth anything
Or anything doubled

Me and you
Him and I
Me, myself
That's how I'll die

No third chances
Not even a second try
Those were your words
You never lie

So I'll stop these thoughts
I'll stop my life
Here's my throat
And there's the knife

No third chances
No second try
I'll say these words
And then I'll die

I had my once
And you did too
I'll follow your words
How about you

When you find my thoughts
You will find my heart
No life after
No second start




Copyright © aural_b ... [ 2004-03-01 10:01:55]
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Re: No Third Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:08:41 AM AEST
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That poem captures the emotion so well...For the first half of the poem I actually related to it so much it was like I was writing it. It was kind of creepy...Just as long as you are putting this into poetry and venting rather than actually doing this to yourself. keep up the great work. I'd love to read more of your poetry.
-sushi


Re: No Third Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:37:36 AM AEST
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I think alot of us relate to your poem. Very sad but beautifully placed into words. From the title to the last verse it was deeply touching. Kie




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