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The Ghost of Me
Contributed by
geoffreyalanbest
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:52:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It came in the night when I awoke from a bad dream
It was sitting at the end of my bed just looking at me with blank eyes
It was me but it was not me now
I sat up and stared at it, at me for a moment
"What?"
"Yes, I am" it said stopping me
My blood ran cold looking at its white face that displayed no expression
The face looked as if it was laid out in a coffin
The eyes were opened but they were as white as the skin
It was me but just a little bit older or harsher
I wondered if this was me near
"Yes" it said without any stirring
The mouth just opened and close as it talked with no expression
"You are me and I am you but soon we will be I"
"when" I asked
"Soon" It said
"How soon" I asked
"You have not awakened and you never will"
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Re: The Ghost of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:00:41 PM AEST (User
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Wow that was friggin creepy. i loved it! awesome write. keep it up.
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Re: The Ghost of Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallensilence on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:26:21 PM AEST (User
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this is a very powerful poem. i loved it-david |
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