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the tigress runs with green water
slow deliberate attempts
to reach a conclusoin
sweating in the desert
the sun beating
like a drum
insistent measures
hour after hour
until darkness throws
it's dark shawl down
over the sky
we sit in the courtyard
drinking strong coffee
smoke aromatic cigarettes
rehash the days events
tracing the tiles under my fingertips
nervous energy returning
as we move closer
to our conclusion

*
~()~
*
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Arabian Night

Contributed by merry on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:21:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

*****************************
the tigress runs with green water
slow deliberate attempts
to reach a conclusoin
sweating in the desert
the sun beating
like a drum
insistent measures
hour after hour
until darkness throws
it's dark shawl down
over the sky
we sit in the courtyard
drinking strong coffee
smoke aromatic cigarettes
rehash the days events
tracing the tiles under my fingertips
nervous energy returning
as we move closer
to our conclusion

*
~()~
*

Copyright © merry ... [ 2004-02-29 21:21:03]
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Re: Arabian Night (User Rating: 1 )
by hearmyvoice on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:33:23 PM AEST
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great! A bit mysterious, I like that!

Re: Arabian Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:58:05 PM AEST
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tigers and coffee, deserts and tiles, there is not one of your poems gaille, that has not brought a smile:) hugs n' love daisy*ness

Re: Arabian Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:20:23 PM AEST
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Oh this is just perfection. Maybe you could do a series? Loved this one. Kie

Re: Arabian Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:06:39 PM AEST
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I think you could write about an ant hill and make it sound like the most important and interesting thing ever concieved. You talent for making common place seem uncommon is astounding.

Roses for a daisy

Larry

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