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I've had as much as I can take.
The thoughts and memories and such
I wish I didn't have.

I can't escape it.
I thought I had side stepped these feelings.
I'm falling into a bottomless pit.
The wave of emotions crashes over me again.

I try to hide,
I pull the covers over my head.
Through me fear does glide.
The feelings still reach me through the blankets.

I take a tack to bleed away my pain.
Trying to find a place on my arm to hide my cuts.
Briefly disappears the anxiety and shame.
But only for a short time.

The throbbing stops and I'm left again with nothing but my sorrow.
Inside I'm troubled and tortured.
I pray that I do not wake up tomorrow.
My emotional roller coaster never ends. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 366 [topic] => 13 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Falling Into Feeling

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pain and guilt is all too much,
I've had as much as I can take.
The thoughts and memories and such
I wish I didn't have.

I can't escape it.
I thought I had side stepped these feelings.
I'm falling into a bottomless pit.
The wave of emotions crashes over me again.

I try to hide,
I pull the covers over my head.
Through me fear does glide.
The feelings still reach me through the blankets.

I take a tack to bleed away my pain.
Trying to find a place on my arm to hide my cuts.
Briefly disappears the anxiety and shame.
But only for a short time.

The throbbing stops and I'm left again with nothing but my sorrow.
Inside I'm troubled and tortured.
I pray that I do not wake up tomorrow.
My emotional roller coaster never ends.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-02-29 19:39:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Falling Into Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:06:08 PM AEST
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good write, I think dark is the right catagory, as this poem got it all sadness hate agony, and yet i hope it isnt something you are going through, I've been there already and I wouldnt wish it upon anyone.
Take care and keep on writing.

Re: Falling Into Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:25:57 PM AEST
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wonderful expression of feelings, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Falling Into Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:33:03 PM AEST
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MY BROTHER USED TO CUT HIMSELF TO FEEL OUTER PAIN RATHER THAN INNER
I HOPE YOU CAN OVERCOME- GOOD POEM KEEP WRITING

Re: Falling Into Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:35:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful, emotive writing.
I could feel the despair as I read each line.
I enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing.

Queen_Dolly

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