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Array ( [sid] => 36813 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yourself before the band [time] => 2004-02-29 19:03:01 [hometext] => :S this just came out... i dont know from where though... my band is beyond help :( [bodytext] => I hear...
the loud rumble of the bass.
the sweet tune on my guitar.
the hard smashes on the drums.
the complaints of the lead singer.
I see...
a hip new band ready to roll.
a bus pass and no wheres to go.
a potential hit on the way but,
no one to play it at the big show.
I feel...
The impression that failure leaves.
no need to try anymore to succeed.
emotions hitting me left and right.
like i have no will left to fight.
I think...
about the times when we were happy
about when we all used to care
about how we used to want to go somewhere
about us and the memories thrown away
I cant beleive...
how easy we all just give up and stop.
how we can pretend it never happened.
we threw away our hopes and dreams.
we all did it out of selfishness.
that we thought of ourselves before
the band. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Yourself before the band

Contributed by SAT on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I hear...
the loud rumble of the bass.
the sweet tune on my guitar.
the hard smashes on the drums.
the complaints of the lead singer.
I see...
a hip new band ready to roll.
a bus pass and no wheres to go.
a potential hit on the way but,
no one to play it at the big show.
I feel...
The impression that failure leaves.
no need to try anymore to succeed.
emotions hitting me left and right.
like i have no will left to fight.
I think...
about the times when we were happy
about when we all used to care
about how we used to want to go somewhere
about us and the memories thrown away
I cant beleive...
how easy we all just give up and stop.
how we can pretend it never happened.
we threw away our hopes and dreams.
we all did it out of selfishness.
that we thought of ourselves before
the band.

Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-02-29 19:03:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Yourself before the band (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:10:16 PM AEST
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IT'S A HARD THING TO DO! IT'S NOT EASY & ALWAYS TRUE!! NO MATTER HOW FAR YOU DO OR DO NOT GET-YOU HAD THE COURAGE TO TRY & BRING A DREAM OR 2 ALIVE!!! IT TAKES A GREAT HEART & ONE HELL OF AN ATTITUDE TO TRY & MAKE SOMETHING LIKE THAT COME TRUE!!!! SO DON'T FEEL BAD,AT LEAST YOU TRIED,& THAT'S ALL THAT COUNTS!!!!! NICE POEM & A GREAT SUBJECT-NUFF SAID!!!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!!!

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