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Array ( [sid] => 36795 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Fairy Tale [time] => 2004-02-29 16:02:23 [hometext] => Yet another work inspired by unrequited love... ...every fairy tale must have an end... ...please read and comment if you wish... [bodytext] => So, this is how it ends...
Tomorrow won't replace
The days I've wasted
Mourning love for you
That you never knew was real.
I've casted my soul upon the waters
Hoping you would find me there
And save me from myself
But you never did...

So this is how it ends...
I'm drowning in my sorrow.
Glimpses of a fantasy---
---my only confort
I smile at thoughts of what could have been
Until hope shows to me it's true face
Opening my eyes to truth
The light's too bright
I can go on like this

So, this is how it ends...
Oh, handsome prince of mine,
Why have you forsaken me?
Why have you left me here to die?
My fantasy is but another dream
Left to linger on
Inside a past that never was
A shadow of what could have been
Creates false hopes within me
Your ghost is left to haunt me here
Inside my nightmare I've made real

So this is how it ends...
Every fairy tale must have one
There is nothing for me here---only death
'Tis at hand! I have nothing left!
Come hither, oh sweet prince of mine
Lest death be this tale's happy end
Your face has faded in the back of my mind
Left to linger there---untended
Oh, sweet and handsome prince of mine,
Must fate overtake my love?
Oh sweet and handsome prince of mine,
Must this be how my tale must end? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SkYYBLu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
My Fairy Tale

Contributed by SkYYBLu on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:02:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



So, this is how it ends...
Tomorrow won't replace
The days I've wasted
Mourning love for you
That you never knew was real.
I've casted my soul upon the waters
Hoping you would find me there
And save me from myself
But you never did...

So this is how it ends...
I'm drowning in my sorrow.
Glimpses of a fantasy---
---my only confort
I smile at thoughts of what could have been
Until hope shows to me it's true face
Opening my eyes to truth
The light's too bright
I can go on like this

So, this is how it ends...
Oh, handsome prince of mine,
Why have you forsaken me?
Why have you left me here to die?
My fantasy is but another dream
Left to linger on
Inside a past that never was
A shadow of what could have been
Creates false hopes within me
Your ghost is left to haunt me here
Inside my nightmare I've made real

So this is how it ends...
Every fairy tale must have one
There is nothing for me here---only death
'Tis at hand! I have nothing left!
Come hither, oh sweet prince of mine
Lest death be this tale's happy end
Your face has faded in the back of my mind
Left to linger there---untended
Oh, sweet and handsome prince of mine,
Must fate overtake my love?
Oh sweet and handsome prince of mine,
Must this be how my tale must end?




Copyright © SkYYBLu ... [ 2004-02-29 16:02:23]
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Re: My Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:29:46 PM AEST
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dearest paige, it never ceases to amaze me how love can be turned off like a water faucett, leaving us in the dust, brilliant enchanting poem here, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa


Re: My Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by BrghtNSnshny on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:39:31 PM AEST
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I'm never surprised at how how love is such a popular emotion to write poetry about, that then i am surprised (in a good way) how well you have captivated the feelings, how quickly love once there is lost..great write


Re: My Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:25:53 PM AEST
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That was a very nice story type poem all the way through. Keep them coming, oh read one of mine please. Wes...


Re: My Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:41:18 PM AEST
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Although I more into my Darker poetry, I thought have a read of something different, and I'm glad I did.
You have such an awesome talent of creating such vivd images, Your poem grabbed me and held me to the end.
This was one excellent poem, no wonder you are such a talented writer, keep it up.




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