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Array ( [sid] => 3674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mound [time] => 2002-09-11 10:04:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i felt into your womb
the inside of the thought
blind to see it was too soon
now look at all it's brought
your pain is mine and i said the words
to dig a hole where i could bury the hurt
it did no good because i'm stuck in a ditch
bugs are creeping around and i have an itch
when i think of you...
all when i become you.

this looks all surreal
i don't know what it means
trying to turn from the wheel
when nothing is what it seems
it's an endless cycle where i'm closed in
no never move further with this chagrin
i want to climb out right out of this hole
but i lost the meaning of having control
when i think of you...
all when i become you.

now what is to become
of the way that i exist
i don't how to live today
when all you do is insist

you said it would
all go away
but it's not so
what do you say
you said it would
all go away...
it's still here today
i'm right into your way
now will it
all go away

***
(9/10/02) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 34 [informant] => daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Mound

Contributed by daniel on Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 10:04:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

i felt into your womb
the inside of the thought
blind to see it was too soon
now look at all it's brought
your pain is mine and i said the words
to dig a hole where i could bury the hurt
it did no good because i'm stuck in a ditch
bugs are creeping around and i have an itch
when i think of you...
all when i become you.

this looks all surreal
i don't know what it means
trying to turn from the wheel
when nothing is what it seems
it's an endless cycle where i'm closed in
no never move further with this chagrin
i want to climb out right out of this hole
but i lost the meaning of having control
when i think of you...
all when i become you.

now what is to become
of the way that i exist
i don't how to live today
when all you do is insist

you said it would
all go away
but it's not so
what do you say
you said it would
all go away...
it's still here today
i'm right into your way
now will it
all go away

***
(9/10/02)

Copyright © daniel ... [ 2002-09-11 10:04:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mound (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 11:53:17 AM AEST
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Daniel very nice poem. Thank you fro writing it for us to share

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