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Array ( [sid] => 36726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen Angel [time] => 2004-02-28 23:36:07 [hometext] => you know who you are! [bodytext] => Late one night,
I awake
To find you there,
not a dream.

I close my eyes;
lay and think,
of how much
I love you so.

I open my eyes
and see yours.
So crystal blue;
deep and telling.

They remind me of
the eyes of
a fallen angel.
For that is what you are.

Cast from Heaven
For refusing to bow
to another's will,
other than your own.

For wanting what
you could not have;
But went against,
and got it anyway.

Even as you gaze
at me now,
I can see how
you feel inside.

You truely feel
that falling from Heaven
was worth having me.
All for your own.

So we recreate
our own Heaven
right here,
right now.

As you peer down at me,
I am glad that you
took the fall to be
here with me now.

You are mine.
My Fallen Angel,
here to bring us both
a little taste of Heaven. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Fallen Angel

Contributed by Elf on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Late one night,
I awake
To find you there,
not a dream.

I close my eyes;
lay and think,
of how much
I love you so.

I open my eyes
and see yours.
So crystal blue;
deep and telling.

They remind me of
the eyes of
a fallen angel.
For that is what you are.

Cast from Heaven
For refusing to bow
to another's will,
other than your own.

For wanting what
you could not have;
But went against,
and got it anyway.

Even as you gaze
at me now,
I can see how
you feel inside.

You truely feel
that falling from Heaven
was worth having me.
All for your own.

So we recreate
our own Heaven
right here,
right now.

As you peer down at me,
I am glad that you
took the fall to be
here with me now.

You are mine.
My Fallen Angel,
here to bring us both
a little taste of Heaven.

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2004-02-28 23:36:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:47:13 PM AEST
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This is a excellent peice of work! Good job!

Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:00:45 AM AEST
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This is beautifull!
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Heman on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:13:32 AM AEST
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good poem. this must be straight from ur heart. good job

Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:52:17 PM AEST
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Very interesting, and very well written. I like it.
Take care.
David

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