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Array ( [sid] => 36669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Missing You [time] => 2004-02-28 11:48:02 [hometext] => this poem is dedicated to someone who dumped me, and i'm still not over them. [bodytext] => Distracted by the tears falling on this page,
I'm lost and i'm sad when i can't see your face.
I miss the touch of your hand,
Gently holding mine.
I miss the way your eyes sparkled when i starred into them for a long time.
I miss hearing your voice when i pick up the phone,
Mornings arn't the same... I'm all alone.
What'd i do to make you go away?
I wish you would tell me...
I wish i could change.
I'll never find someone exactly like you.
God knows i'll try.
But there's nothing else i can do. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 428 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Chilibear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Missing You

Contributed by Chilibear on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:48:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Distracted by the tears falling on this page,
I'm lost and i'm sad when i can't see your face.
I miss the touch of your hand,
Gently holding mine.
I miss the way your eyes sparkled when i starred into them for a long time.
I miss hearing your voice when i pick up the phone,
Mornings arn't the same... I'm all alone.
What'd i do to make you go away?
I wish you would tell me...
I wish i could change.
I'll never find someone exactly like you.
God knows i'll try.
But there's nothing else i can do.

Copyright © Chilibear ... [ 2004-02-28 11:48:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:41:23 PM AEST
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Dont let yourself down.. you will find love once again ... outcomes arnt always what we want them to be.. but if you leave with everything that you want you will never grow stronger from it but if you have to learn from something and help yourself instead of someone else helping you.. you will find yourself and know your limits... you didnt do anything to make him go away things happen for a reason/ reasons unknown but maybe it was for the best.. i know its hard but move on.. the pain will eventually go away and you will remember the good times...

Great write/// im kinda amazed that noone else has commented on your poem i thought it was great and i enjoyed it.. keep up the good work
~neglected1~

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Chilibear on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 12:41:28 AM AEST
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Oh my God! Neglected1 thank you so much for your comment. It almost made me cry when i read it. It was four months ago whenbout he left and i'm still really upset about it, but i'm going to try and get over it.

- Chilibear

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:35:32 AM AEST
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'I miss hearing your voice/ when i pick up the phone,/ Mornings arn't the same... I'm all alone.' These two lines sounds so nice, almost like a song!
Neglected1 have a point there, you know, you should just think it as it is happen for the best, may be you two just not meant to be.... and are you sure you try hard enough? There are always someone worthy out there, and may be they are not exactly like him, because they could be better and more loving, and love you back! The only question is, do you try hard enough, or you just sit at the corner and refuse to look up.....

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