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Do things matter when you're a Bonsai Tree?
Potted and watered, cared for and tended.

I wondered as I watch the sun through my window.See how its small trunk twists while reaching for the sun In the mornings, until the last rays of the evening Sun.

Don't I wish ,I could have that Peace and tranquill it receives .
As the beams kisses its branches and leaves it safe and warm, growing free.

Leaving me to feel at times ,wishing I were that tree.

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Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill

Contributed by Whisper on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:48:25 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill

Do things matter when you're a Bonsai Tree?
Potted and watered, cared for and tended.

I wondered as I watch the sun through my window.See how its small trunk twists while reaching for the sun In the mornings, until the last rays of the evening Sun.

Don't I wish ,I could have that Peace and tranquill it receives .
As the beams kisses its branches and leaves it safe and warm, growing free.

Leaving me to feel at times ,wishing I were that tree.

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2004-02-27 19:48:25]
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Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:45:18 PM AEST
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This is an excellent peice of work!

Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:38:37 AM AEST
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You can have that peace and tranquility. It comes by being thankful for your blessings that are unearned by you . And thankful for the mercy of God that prevents us from getting what we've earned, by sin. God Bless

Lionel

Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:45:33 AM AEST
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PS. I got so busy preaching to you - I forgot to tell you: I liked the poem. It shows contemplative thought and great ability putting that thought into words.

Lionel

Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:11:05 PM AEST
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very nice and peaceful, they do radiate a mellow quality, dont they? hugs n' love nessa

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