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Nothing But Teardrops

Contributed by ruby1987 on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 04:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide




Drop
Drop
Drop
Aimless, stupid tears
Just the wrist
Scattering blood
Through my freshly
Sliced flesh
Acing and stinging
I spin in my head
Blood
On your face
The disbelief,
Terror-
It is hilarious
The expression
On your face

Blue around you
I’m delirious
In your ecstasy
Drop
Drop
Drop
I fall
To my knees
Joining my
Blood on the
Floor

Hold me
Look what I’ve
Done
Hold me
One last
Time
Because
I will
Drop
Drop
Drop
From you
My tears
My blood
Your tears
My life
Drop
Drop
Drop
Its nothing but teardrops





Copyright © ruby1987 ... [ 2004-02-27 16:56:47]
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Re: Nothing But Teardrops (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 05:12:03 PM AEST
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I loved the structure of this poem....can't say I enjoyed the content too much....but well done anyway..
Jenni


Re: Nothing But Teardrops (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:32:46 PM AEST
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Wow. That was amazing. I'm truely stunned. The form you used was most impactful. You discribed it very well. Amazing.




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