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Array ( [sid] => 36555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So I see her [time] => 2004-02-27 10:47:22 [hometext] => Since the very beginning I have had strong feelings for Connie Sue, I was not sure for a long time, how to explain what I feel the right way... [bodytext] => So much love
And word drawing pictures
Tears and cries
And joy and happiness

Forever shining sun
With voice caressing soul
How proud I would be
To call this lady „Mom“

The tree with strong branches
Hugging the world
Although they tried to hew
She never let them chop her down

So I see her, Connie Sue
Beautiful rainbow, life-saving rain
Morning dew, which working hard
In her garden cares after every flower

Hrozně moc lásky
A obrázky malující slova
Slzy i pláč
Štěstí a radost

Věčně zářící slunce
S duší hladícím hlasem
Jak byla bych pyšná
Tuhle paní oslovit Mami

Strom se silnými větvemi
Objímající svět
Ačkoliv do něj rubali
Nenechal se pokácet

Tak ji vidím, Connie Sue
Nádhernou duhu, spásný déšť
Ranní rosu, jež prací neúnavnou
Ve své zahradě osvěží každý květ

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So I see her

Contributed by Aika on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:47:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So much love
And word drawing pictures
Tears and cries
And joy and happiness

Forever shining sun
With voice caressing soul
How proud I would be
To call this lady „Mom“

The tree with strong branches
Hugging the world
Although they tried to hew
She never let them chop her down

So I see her, Connie Sue
Beautiful rainbow, life-saving rain
Morning dew, which working hard
In her garden cares after every flower

Hrozně moc lásky
A obrázky malující slova
Slzy i pláč
Štěstí a radost

Věčně zářící slunce
S duší hladícím hlasem
Jak byla bych pyšná
Tuhle paní oslovit Mami

Strom se silnými větvemi
Objímající svět
Ačkoliv do něj rubali
Nenechal se pokácet

Tak ji vidím, Connie Sue
Nádhernou duhu, spásný déšť
Ranní rosu, jež prací neúnavnou
Ve své zahradě osvěží každý květ

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-02-27 10:47:22]
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Re: So I see her (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:07:27 PM AEST
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Oh my dear friend Aika, what a beautiful poem you created for me. What a lovely gift you have bestowed. Thank you so much, but remember.......it takes one to know one.....and if I was to write a poem about you....this is exactly what I would say.......about you!
How endearing Aika.......I will cherish this and you......forever! This is evidence of what your heart holds.....for every poem is an extension of your heart!
love you
consue

Re: So I see her (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:58:44 PM AEST
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What a lovely tribute to ConSue. She is a remarkable person and so are you. Thank you for sharing this with us. Kie

Re: So I see her (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:33:01 PM AEST
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dearest aika, this is very sweet and pretty:) hugs n' love nessa

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