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[aid] => mick
[title] => Trying Times
[time] => 2004-02-27 02:15:16
[hometext] => about someone who tries to reach everyones expectations and just cant handle failing everyone...wrote this like over a year ago, but im posting it anyways.
[bodytext] => the dreams i had the wishes i made once were alive but now are laid inside a tomb under the ground they're forever gone never to be found i had high hopes i thought that i could make them come true but they never would for awhile they flew above the sky with the birds up so high but down they fell down so fast back to reality i came with a crash so now im here in the shadows i sit alone and rejected my face isnt lit here in the darkness im broken and torn my hearts filled with anguish so lonely and worn i pray to my lord for my soul to keep although im a failure please do not weep i'll do better next time i'll try hard to maybe in heaven if only i'd knew please, hear my cries in this alley, alone take my life in pain, i moan im sorry i failed and let everyone down i really did try to fit into the gown im so sorry that i never reached expectations but deep in my heart i had good intentions didnt want to cause pain never meant to hurt anyone but soon it'll be over just hand me the gun is this the right thing? will anyone care? my finger pulls the trigger blindly i stare now its all finished my lifes been a dud but now i see the light as i lie in my blood [comments] => 1 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crimsondream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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