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[aid] => mick
[title] => Stale Sugar
[time] => 2004-02-27 00:02:22
[hometext] => This poem should convey an image which is a commonly experienced sensation at carnivals. What is eating you? No, what are you eating in this poem?
[bodytext] => Routine Giving a bland hint To even the sweetest sugar A stale taste A flat note Ruining the most beautiful melody A separation from the rest A sour word To spoil a delicious meal Forever remembered As the moment of truth The covers thrown off There lies the naked truth Not always pleasing Yet pleasing In that raw openness The sweetest part Of the sticky fluff One little cluster In the mass of it all A clump crystalized Hardened Ugly Stale sugar Lingering Forever long after The appeasing [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 43 [informant] => desireemiote [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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