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Array ( [sid] => 36513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blurry vision of 6:18 [time] => 2004-02-26 22:30:52 [hometext] => i was bored didnt put too much thought into this one but i dont know jus wanted to know what people had to say i guess!! [bodytext] => Easily said then done
finally the awakening morning comes
most likely a ritual routine
getting up from the sound of quiet music
and the blurry vision seeing 6:18
just another day feeling some what of remorse
and wondering what things will possible come
and some time later of getting ready
shower makeup trying to be some what presentable
just one thought comes into mind
just another day
still seeing things not so clear and everything
seems hazy a more lifted up attitude appears
from the one sleepy almost unconscious self
turns into a brighter and more reliable self
undergoing different emotions and entering
different thoughts to connect everything
making the best of every situation
the thought of going back to bed still lingers in the farthest side
but then some what of a struggle comes out of it
knowing that the same old thing is going to end up happening again
living life young and free
thats what i would like to say and live by
but i know things dont happen as what you want
but happen for the best of interests
yet another morning comes and i wake up to a certain
remembrance from times before even though
a different sound comes from the
blurry vision of 6:18 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => neglected1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Blurry vision of 6:18

Contributed by neglected1 on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:30:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Easily said then done
finally the awakening morning comes
most likely a ritual routine
getting up from the sound of quiet music
and the blurry vision seeing 6:18
just another day feeling some what of remorse
and wondering what things will possible come
and some time later of getting ready
shower makeup trying to be some what presentable
just one thought comes into mind
just another day
still seeing things not so clear and everything
seems hazy a more lifted up attitude appears
from the one sleepy almost unconscious self
turns into a brighter and more reliable self
undergoing different emotions and entering
different thoughts to connect everything
making the best of every situation
the thought of going back to bed still lingers in the farthest side
but then some what of a struggle comes out of it
knowing that the same old thing is going to end up happening again
living life young and free
thats what i would like to say and live by
but i know things dont happen as what you want
but happen for the best of interests
yet another morning comes and i wake up to a certain
remembrance from times before even though
a different sound comes from the
blurry vision of 6:18




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Re: Blurry vision of 6:18 (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:13:18 PM AEST
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for not much thought it is real good i know the feelings and the time so well

michelle


Re: Blurry vision of 6:18 (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:43:43 AM AEST
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blurry vision of 6:49
im not awake enough to think all those thoughts in the least. i just wish that it isnt a monday and on with the routine!




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