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Array ( [sid] => 36510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tightrope [time] => 2004-02-26 22:13:59 [hometext] => This is one of my favorite poems I have written. I feel it captures my struggle [bodytext] => I used to give my heart away so quickly there was pain,
Now I hold it tight, never let go and it's the same,
I can't find my footing on this heartbreaking tightrope,
And it seems I've lost my faith, my hope.

It's a balancing act and I'm on my way down,
Falling, Falling never hitting the ground,
Waiting for bottom, becuase there lies stability,
Please strip me of all, leave me no humility.

Can't you see I'm the extra piece in this jigsaw,
Everybody knows right where they fall,
But me, I'm never a part of the whole,
I distort the picture never filling the (w)hole.

So far from bottom, I'm never getting close,
Because I fall, it drops and still nobody knows,
They just see me suspended in air,
Ignoring my decline thinking thier's might compare.
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Tightrope

Contributed by tetniz on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:13:59 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I used to give my heart away so quickly there was pain,
Now I hold it tight, never let go and it's the same,
I can't find my footing on this heartbreaking tightrope,
And it seems I've lost my faith, my hope.

It's a balancing act and I'm on my way down,
Falling, Falling never hitting the ground,
Waiting for bottom, becuase there lies stability,
Please strip me of all, leave me no humility.

Can't you see I'm the extra piece in this jigsaw,
Everybody knows right where they fall,
But me, I'm never a part of the whole,
I distort the picture never filling the (w)hole.

So far from bottom, I'm never getting close,
Because I fall, it drops and still nobody knows,
They just see me suspended in air,
Ignoring my decline thinking thier's might compare.

Copyright © tetniz ... [ 2004-02-26 22:13:59]
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Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by stolen-tears on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:18:47 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
keep it up

chrissy

Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:28:32 PM AEST
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definetely a 5 for this poem
awesome!!

Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:54:41 PM AEST
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Lovely write.....it really does capture it well..
Jenni

Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:13:20 AM AEST
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very good and very well written. I enjoyed it.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Tightrope (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 12:00:30 AM AEST
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Awesome write!
I had to read it a few times over!

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